| "Thawing the Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: mdfang On: March 14, 2005 19:50 CST
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Well, okay, where is the rest of the story!?!?! Hurry up and put some more great chapters up!
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Reviewed By: djbrown [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 15:41 CST
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Wow...you built up a great tension between Homura and Konzen...The interaction between these two characters was very gripping. Once I started reading, my attention was captured and kept through out the entire chapter. Well done! I am looking forward to your next chapter!
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