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Reviewed By: WolfSisterJazlynn On: January 16, 2005 21:11 CST
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your an awsome writer, no stoppy, keep writing, and now that i reviewed you cant sop writing, becuz i reviewed, and just cuz your a good writer and i demand you continue writing lemons! ^_^
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Reviewed By: frankie girl On: January 15, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write Write Write! I'm reviewing,,,,Write! lol, i think you are very good at this, no stopping,lol
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Title: wow you arr really getting there
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That word can mean a lot I didn't know you had this type for writing style in you ... it really shooked me but it was still good..... I didn't think that Inuyasha was going to let Sess. miroku get that clost to Kagome...LoL! Good work
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai(Lazey not signed in) On: January 15, 2005 11:20 CST
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KEEP GOING THIS IS GOOD! You are great at Lemons the group one is fantastic! Come on share your talent!
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Reviewed By: aoshi4misao (not logged in) On: January 14, 2005 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good collection of lemons, you don't find many Mirkou/Sango and definetly not the group one. That was my favorite, but you could have made it longer. Just a suggestion, but you might get more reviews if you didn't demand them from everyone. It was a good collection of fics though, good job and keep up the good work. Maybe add more group things? *hint, hint* :D Anyway, good job
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Reviewed By: CrimsonEyes7806 On: January 14, 2005 21:25 CST
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Great job. Can we say horny? LOL. Good lemon(s).
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Title: Daaaaaaammmmmn.....
Reviewed By: Ayane~Chan On: January 14, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the horniest lemon I've ever read. I demand More!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Starkiss On: January 14, 2005 14:09 CST
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Very good smut maybe get a beta or add some yuri, or bondage.
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Reviewed By: Theyeta On: January 13, 2005 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow... That has to have been the STRANGEST pairing I have ever seen... *grins* but it was good! Keep writing!!! (i like to send these to my boyfriend to see his reaction when he reads them) lol.. ~Love~ Theyeta
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285(not signed in) On: January 13, 2005 18:25 CST
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you must continue!!! people are just really bad at writing reviews. ff.net is a better place for that.. but they don't let nc.17.. good luck tho
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Reviewed By: tigerlily On: January 11, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story. I realy enjoyed it. Keep writting beacuse you are realy good at it.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ Wow! That was soooo cute and sweet! I almost cried ^-^! You could actually feel their love for each other! It's just sooo adorable that Miroku cares that much for her ^-^ I wanna be cared for like that from a hott guy ^-^; lol anyways really good ficcy and I hope you'll write more soon! ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: ITS GETTING HOT IN HERE!!
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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releally good!!! IS IT JUST ME OR IS IT GETTING HOT IN HERE. THEY SURE DIDN'T TAKE ALL THIER CLOTHES OFF!!!! anywho really nice...hate to ask but how old are you? it seems lemons are running rampoant in our teenage society. cheak out my sess/kags fic please and review. seems people aren't reviewing for some odd reason.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome. but one question. did their clothes just disappear? you never said anything about the clothes coming off. it was just weird
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 (NLI) or xxxkaitsurinuxxx On: December 03, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww....how great.... ^_^ good job.
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