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Reviewed By: whee! On: September 12, 2005 14:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: do another smut!
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Title: OMFG!!! Reviewed By: InuYashasGirl467 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 04:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: **Shouts to other side of room** "Mommy! She made me wet!" lol j/k omg I LOVE YOUR STORY! YOU are AWSOME!!! I Do hope you write more soon. Because......woa....it was...the best story I have seen yet....THANK YOU I LOVE YOU!!!
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Title: so good!!! Reviewed By: inusgirl On: July 22, 2005 18:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: loved it so much. i soooo need a cold shower now. the smut and punishment stuff was the best. keep going please. i think ur a great writer.
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Title: that rocked Reviewed By: cloudlesssky11 On: July 07, 2005 09:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: so sexy that so did rock write more like that
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Title: YAhoo!!! Reviewed By: Kaggy-chan2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 14:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was GREAT!!!! I loved it!!!! You should write more!!!
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Reviewed By: Jenner93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 23:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You could do Sesshomaru and Rin or Sesshomaru and Kagura. I hope you find your inspiration comes back Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Dokumori [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 10:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just read the whole series if thats a good name for what it is and I think its great! Awsome writing, just please keep going :) Anyways wish I could have started when it was first posted, I review just about everyhting I read :) Hope you start writing again soon! ~Yami~
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Title: me help Reviewed By: b.b On: May 28, 2005 01:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i have an idea i don no if it'll help but why not have a few stories about san/mir,inu/kag(my persoanal fav couple), and rin/sess first time together liking first confessing there love? i would like that. but ionno its up to you. i love how you write so i hope i helped you. byebye!!!
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Title: hm Reviewed By: Taijiya Sango On: May 26, 2005 11:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was cute one. Write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: some girl On: May 25, 2005 22:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh god i am sooooo horney write now! i jsut read all of your chapters in the past 15 minutes and god am i horned up!!!! you should so have an orgy as one of them!
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Reviewed By: the grace of hatred [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 00:56 CDT Comment/Review: i think i need a cold shower...
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Reviewed By: Angelic Zero On: April 29, 2005 18:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: *Looks down at pants* Aw, #@$%&!! ((That means they were good.))
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Title: InuYashaswoman05 Reviewed By: Piglet On: April 19, 2005 18:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: man i loved the fanfics, my friend sent me the link to them and oh man i love them. i am a published author so if you would like any help with editing or anything like that just email me at juganlover123@walmartconnect.com again i love the fics.
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Reviewed By: budthud On: April 03, 2005 18:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love the smut, make more, lots more...
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Reviewed By: anime_firever! On: March 02, 2005 00:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i loved it keep it up. i would really like to see another group thing
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