| "Lemon Archives" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starkiss On: January 14, 2005 14:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good smut maybe get a beta or add some yuri, or bondage.
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Reviewed By: Theyeta On: January 13, 2005 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow... That has to have been the STRANGEST pairing I have ever seen... *grins* but it was good! Keep writing!!! (i like to send these to my boyfriend to see his reaction when he reads them) lol.. ~Love~ Theyeta
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285(not signed in) On: January 13, 2005 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
you must continue!!! people are just really bad at writing reviews. ff.net is a better place for that.. but they don't let nc.17.. good luck tho
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Reviewed By: tigerlily On: January 11, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story. I realy enjoyed it. Keep writting beacuse you are realy good at it.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ Wow! That was soooo cute and sweet! I almost cried ^-^! You could actually feel their love for each other! It's just sooo adorable that Miroku cares that much for her ^-^ I wanna be cared for like that from a hott guy ^-^; lol anyways really good ficcy and I hope you'll write more soon! ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: ITS GETTING HOT IN HERE!!
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
releally good!!! IS IT JUST ME OR IS IT GETTING HOT IN HERE. THEY SURE DIDN'T TAKE ALL THIER CLOTHES OFF!!!! anywho really nice...hate to ask but how old are you? it seems lemons are running rampoant in our teenage society. cheak out my sess/kags fic please and review. seems people aren't reviewing for some odd reason.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome. but one question. did their clothes just disappear? you never said anything about the clothes coming off. it was just weird
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 (NLI) or xxxkaitsurinuxxx On: December 03, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww....how great.... ^_^ good job.
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