| "Return To Me" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on you gotta make a second for Bakura and Ryou! You can do it come on! Other than that this was funny and sweet! I loved it Ja ne! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 10:17 CST
Comment/Review:
nice epilogue, cute ending to, made me laugh
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
*lmao* now that's excatly the comment for Joey to make. haha I adored your story. Keep it up :)
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Title: AWWW! KAWAII!
Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, this story was so amazing! Good job on it and I really like it and all that! WOW! It's so cute...and the fact that Joey kept using all those insinuations without even knowing it...that was priceless! I love this story, it's amazing! GOOD JOB! I love this!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 10:45 CST
Comment/Review:
haha, that was a good story. A good mix of humor and a serious thing thrown in. But, don't tell this is it right? I hope there will be more!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, really good chapter! Seriously, is that it? Awww...c'mon, there's gotta be more or something? That was a really good chapter, I liked it a lot, it was so sweet! If that's the end of the story, good job... But I wish there was more... Good job, I really liked the story, I wish there was more though! If there is, update soon! If not, then wonderful story and I'm glad I saw it through!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh , this is so cute! So adorable! Write more soon! This is so KAWAIIIIIII!
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Title: Hahahahahahhahahaha
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahaha Yami' so cute. Yay now I can *squee* for once lol. Aww did you have to use that thermometer? Poor Little Yami :( You could of used an ear one ya know. Little Yami is so Kawaii. But Yugi better watch what he thinks lol cause his little Yami will pick it up. :). And I understood Yami perfectly hehe.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:11 CST
Comment/Review:
*bursts out laughing.* Man, Yami throws a royal (pun intended) tantrum, doesn't he? They grow up so quickly...this fic is hilarious. That ending scene in chapter two was cute. I was all 'awwwwww!'
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Reviewed By: Aika Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chokes and falls on the floor laughing* Oh. My. Ra! That is so hilarious! *starts choking on her laughter and almost has an asthma attack* I'm okay.
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Reviewed By: wanderer05 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 12:11 CST
Comment/Review:
oh my goodness! that is soooo cute!! that has to be one of the cutest, if not the cutest, thing that i have ever read! you've got to update...there's no question about that!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 08:49 CST
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Yaaay! I cried at the ending to YGO when I found out what it was! You are a genius! Now Yami and Yugi can be together again! Although Yami/Atemu's not making it easy for Yugi...*snickers at the mortifying-for-Yugi underwear incident. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's next!
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