| "Hope lost, and found?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Yakari Taito [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I have absolutely no idea why you chose gold and silver, but I do have a guess. When ever I think of Bakura I think of silver, when I think of Yami I think of Gold, so you switched them because they were meant to combine, oh I don't know! Thanks for the chapter. I enjoyed it. BUT I STILL WANT MORE PLEASE! I think that you might consider a beta, but you could just use spell check. The only miss spelled word I found was magic. There's no 'k' in magic. You also might want them to remind you of titles and things. It was very improper for the pharaoh to use a priest's title, and the priests not to use his. In those days disobedience like that would have been fetal to the priest, just a reminder. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Don't you dare stop! I'll review every chapter if I have to. YOU WILL CONTINUE! Please. I can't wait to find out what Bakura did. And yes I know the feeling.
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