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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! poor Souta, couldn't he just throw a towel over his sister so he can see anything he doesn't want to see...
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome fic, love the characterization hope you update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. You HAVE to update soon! I wonder what's happening to everyone.... Poor Souta, he's prbably scared out of his wits for his sister...lol. Update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 09:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please, please, please update soon! I can't wait to find out what's going on!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:25 CST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:44 CDT
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Seing as you haven't really told us what Endo Enterprises does for a living I can't be really harsh with this, but this chapter should be called -Kagome does something stupid-. No really, Kouga told us that this stuff had come back with the brothers and he was 'working on it' in the lab. They have been back less than a month. That pinkstuff could be a baby Gelatinous Cube for all she knows! But what does our heroine do? She leaves it open in her bathroom (after poking at it) so it can fall into her bathtub and then goes to sleep. Let me tell you this....if she wakes up inside a giant jello, it is so not your fault SF! But on the more serious side, another good chapter. I like the semi-camraderie between the brothers. I wonder why Sess was out longer than Inu - was it because it was exposed to the purple goo longer? I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:33 CDT
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Intrigueing chapter. Inu's sense of smell is heightening but is a little wacko right now. Kouga is, well, Kouga. And I wonder what the pink stuff is. Wasn't it purple before? Was it purple because it had something similar to youki in it and when the brothers sucked some into themselves, the purple part left, leaving the pink? Or am I totally confused. Inu passing out in his office isn't a good thing, and I was a little sad that Kagome didn't go in and notice him - but that is why I'm not the author. :) Onto the next chapter!
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:20 CDT
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What do I think? This looks to be the start of some wierd-ass shit. An Andros flower growing without sunlight, Sesshoumau-eating blue ooze, Inuyasha in the deapths of the central American jungle.....sounds like fun! Onto the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes...another good chapter. Thanks for updating. Hope your summer was good.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 14:13 CDT
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I love this story! It's unlike anything I've ever read before. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 12:34 CDT
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I love the new chapter...update soon...Cheers
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Reviewed By: ~RR On: July 24, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope we'll be seeing more of this one soon. it has a lot of promise, but then again, none of your stories have ever disappointed...
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think that I'll like this story, I'm glad to see that it's been updated. It's also good to know that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha will get along in this fic (more or less lol). I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Well its good so far but the first chapter was ummmmmm diffrent but good none the less.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 16:17 CST
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I love it.....think its amazing....im sry but im not really in the mood to write a big long review or anything but u HAVE to update soon....Cheers
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