| "Unordinary Silver" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 08:08 CDT
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if you dont cuntinu i will die
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Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 14:29 CDT
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woah! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 11:15 CDT
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This story idea is terrific- I certainly hope you decide to continue. I would like to suggest that you get someone to proofread your stuff- there's a large number of errors in this. Not that I mind, but it distracts the reader from following your story. I second thought is that the title is awkward- "Unordinary" is not common usage. Maybe you'd like to conside some synonyms: Extraordinary, Unconventional, Unique, Rare. Thanks and please do continue!
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Reviewed By: Reina Dai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't just stop like that! what happens to them do they get out and how is kagomeinvolved in it? your cruel! hold all the others and just consentrate on this one!
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Reviewed By: battousai rk8520 On: February 09, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ITS GOOD!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:01 CST
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yea sure, continue it but after you finish your other stories please!
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Title: Keep Writng!
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far. I'm also reading The Breaking Point( P.s. Update on that! PLZ!) If The Breaking Point reflects this story at all, it should be great. N/e/ways, i promise to feed you chocolate and lots of Ramen if you'll update them both! Who knows, I might even let you borrow my slave Sesshomaru for a while! Lol, he's so hot! Byby ~kitty
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Reviewed By: lunabelle On: December 03, 2004 23:21 CST
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This sounds very interesting so far. It has the whole Indiana/adventure type feel to it. I love Indiana Jone movies. Good chapter, keep up the great work like always.
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Reviewed By: Dragonpink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 14:54 CST
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I realy like this fic so far and I hope you continue it =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:46 CST
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You better continue. What is that stuff? And when do the rest of the gang show up? Those two together at the biginning is really neat. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: AzeraW On: December 02, 2004 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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