Title: Really Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: jotabe1789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written a great story, congratulations! Maybe the story can be a bit complex and long, and might discourage occasional readers: don't be, or you will be missing a very fine piece of writing. Very original: The main char is made up, but fits nicely! And what an ending!!! (no, i won't spoil it).
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