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| "inyasha vs. beyond the grave" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kasia Matsubishi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was read by both an inuyasha fan and a gungrave fan. AkA me and my b/f. I'm an Inu fan. First let me compliment you on ...attempting to get the personalities right. You tried. But it wasn't good enough. First yeah I'm being a grammer queen but you capitolized NOTHING! You used very few punctuation marks and some of them were wrong.....but yes my b/f and I did enjoy your killing Inuyasha and Kagome. No ceramony, no "You have to live for...me Inuyasha" just boom *claps* wonderful but you got the personalities really wrong and you took things way to fast (the whole colapsing well thing) Inu would never show to kagome just how much he cares for her unless he absolutly had to....and kagome probably would habve started spazzing when the well colapsed. Personally I thought this fanfic was downright awful....but it did bring some enjoyment...you killed alot of people. So for me (my b/f did the above ratings) I''d give you an overall rating of a 2/10....I really don't like Kagome and Inuyasha. My b/f: Wow, I could give a review of the Inu side but I left that to her, but as for gungrave it was a complete and total slaughterization. The only thing you did right was having grave not talk. Grave never used just one cerberous and he would never just simply let Mika die like that. He has sworn to give his life to her, daighter of his mentor and lover.And Mika couldn't hit a can 7 feet away she most certainly wouldn't be able to kill Kag like thatWould say more but Im outta characters
| Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was a tad morbid, but made me laugh. thats what would probably happen too. lol
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