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| "The Man" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jarkota On: December 07, 2004 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. Not bad at all. Some minor spelling mistakes, but pretty good overall (though I don't much care for the treatmen of my favorite Amazon, I still liked it).
| Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad, cute story and it took me most the time to realize where and why they were there. There are a couple of grammer mistakes, a word missing or the wrong word there. The formatting is fine, but the utility adds a space after a paragraph so when you add one too, it makes a large space between paragraphes. I must say I enjoyed this, and didn't even have to see all of the series to get a chuckle out of it.~Fanilia
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