| "None So Blind" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: April 06, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you used to write XFiles fic? If so, I'm a fan from way back! This is some of the best GS fic I've seen. You're a fantastic writer. You're handling the blind thing really well, along with the sexual tension. Interesting so far that I can see that both Hakkai and Goyjo have feelings for Sanzo, but not sure what he senses from them. One small quibble: what's with all the "se" and "hir" around the goddess? At first I thought they were typos, but now I'm thinking it's a feminist thing to elimate letters spelling "he"? If so, it's just distracting. (and I'm a feminist!)
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Title: nice!!!
Reviewed By: hariko_tanaka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it 2 bits!!!u have made my day!!!
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Reviewed By: mdfang On: March 14, 2005 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Fantastic story!!! Any sequel?
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 18:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay.... chapter three is great :) You've got such a talent for humor.
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 18:04 CST
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Chapter two rocks XD I love the whole thing Hakkai and Gojyo have going over Sanzo. And again, this is funny as hell. The only thing I saw was that at times the plot seemed a little vague. I'm not always sure what's happening, because it's so to-the-point without much explanation of anything but dialogue. It's excellent dialogue, but I'm just a little confused at times.
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! My favorite part was the idea of a 'head-slapping fluster dance' XD I can see some great fanart for that..... I also loved the idea of people calling Sanzo a princess.... I've only finished the first chapter, but I am definately going to read all of this, it's too damn funny! I was blurting out laughter at least a dozen times just reading the first chapter... you have a gift. All the characters are so delightedly in character, and the dialogue is well-written and witty. And of course, you can't go wrong with yaoi. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this :) Well, I just had to let you know.... will review again when I read the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: December 09, 2004 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing! I was worried when I saw Goku/Sanzo, but you've never written anything quite like that before so I decided to read it anyway and damn was I happy! Please write a sequel or just more Sanzo yaoiness! I love this! I especially love that you left Goku out of the sex. He's way too young! Ick. Again, this was amazing! I look foward to more from you.
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Reviewed By: Vampy Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 05:46 CST
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*squee* Ah, you've made me happy. That was a lovely fic, and rather tasty side of lemon custard, as well. Heh heh heh, custard. *looks around shiftyly* Ahem, yes, well. Thank you so much for sharing. ^-^
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