| "School for the Bad" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: April 30, 2005 16:01 CDT
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let me guess... there's a trap. sesshomaru's waiting for them inside, and kaede is on sesshy-chan's side. please dont make him the bad guy!!!! i love him!!! oh well... fabulous chapter! i really look forwards to your next chapter, and if you dont mind some contructive critism, i think your writing could use more detail. like, what the places look like and stuff... but, i think everything needs more detail, so dont mind me. and, im so confused by the game they were playing! what the hell was going on? it went WOOSH right over my head...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: April 18, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is this another dream? ive noticed some grammar mistakes, and some wrong tenses, but other than that, totally fabulous! i hope you update soon!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: feh On: April 14, 2005 21:42 CDT
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update soon please
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Title: *in shock*
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (not login) On: April 13, 2005 08:56 CDT
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*gets a machine gun* KILL KAGGIE'S MOM!!! KILL!! KILL!! *pulls trigger* AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! *gun goes wild!* OH SHOOT!!!..... -_-.... Update soon!Does anyone have a bandage? *passes out from injury*
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: April 11, 2005 15:39 CDT
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AAAAAAAHHH!!!! MORE MINI ASSASSINS!!! eep. oh! will they be sent to kill the school kids, but will actually save them? ooo. ^_^
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 21:55 CST
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narrarator: as she read through the chapter, tanwen-hime began to notice a distinct filler quality about the chapter. It was indeed, a filler chpater. and there was much rejoicing. tanwen-hime: ...yay... (>'.')> narrarator: and kirby danced...and so, she continued *CRASH* i hate that guy!!! ANYWAY!!! awesome chpater, though filler chpaters are slightly (very slightly, i still love them) boring. i hope you update soon!!! ~tanwen
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Title: I really need to log on first!!!!! -_-
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (STILL NOT LOGIN) On: March 14, 2005 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....I would write more but I have an annoying perv breathing down my shoulder!!!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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there is going to be a massacre of students, isnt there? i KNEW it... but i still dont know where shippo is going to come in... and i just realized something... kagome is SO ooc... im not complaining, just making note of it. also, im trying to be a nice little reviewer here, and give you some pointers. i think there could be a little more deteail in your chapters... it would make them SO much more interesting. but, i still love the fic!!! i hope you update soon!
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (STILL NOT LOGIN IN!!!!!!!) On: March 04, 2005 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!! I OUGHT TO SMACK THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA HIM!!! *friends hold me back* IF HE WERE REAL I WOULD SHOVE MY FOOT SO FAR UP HIS ASS--!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *calms down and looks around* whoops and people thought I didnt curse....*blushes* UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in On: February 28, 2005 21:55 CST
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holy shit!!!! im so tripping out!!! WTF IS GOING ONNN???? im soooo confused... that whole thing was a premonition in her dream right? and the whole mini assassins thing was a joke, right? STOP TRIPPING ME OUT!!!! my tiny sick brain cant handle it... but kudos on the plot twist! thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (still NOT login) On: February 28, 2005 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! But it keeps skipping words.....is that you or is mm.org screwed up again????
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: February 15, 2005 20:37 CST
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awresome chapter, but i still cant stand the thought of mini shippo assassins. HWY? anyway, awesome chapter, awesoem plot, and i hope you update soon!!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (not login) On: February 13, 2005 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!! KIRARA IS NO LONGER A KITTEN!!!!! I was never expecting that! Keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:45 CST
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UPDATE THIS STORY!! MUST. READ. MORE. I WONT REVEIW ANYMORE IF YOU DONT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Though i will read anyway...........T_T
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:30 CST
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THERE ARE MORE LITTLE MINI ASSASSINS LIKE SHIPPO??? ACK!!! well, awesome chapter, a couple of pelling and grammar mistakes, but, meh! i dont really care, juts pointing them out... ok, i hope you update soon! it's an awesome fic!
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