| "School for the Bad" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 21:55 CST
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narrarator: as she read through the chapter, tanwen-hime began to notice a distinct filler quality about the chapter. It was indeed, a filler chpater. and there was much rejoicing. tanwen-hime: ...yay... (>'.')> narrarator: and kirby danced...and so, she continued *CRASH* i hate that guy!!! ANYWAY!!! awesome chpater, though filler chpaters are slightly (very slightly, i still love them) boring. i hope you update soon!!! ~tanwen
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Title: I really need to log on first!!!!! -_-
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (STILL NOT LOGIN) On: March 14, 2005 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....I would write more but I have an annoying perv breathing down my shoulder!!!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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there is going to be a massacre of students, isnt there? i KNEW it... but i still dont know where shippo is going to come in... and i just realized something... kagome is SO ooc... im not complaining, just making note of it. also, im trying to be a nice little reviewer here, and give you some pointers. i think there could be a little more deteail in your chapters... it would make them SO much more interesting. but, i still love the fic!!! i hope you update soon!
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (STILL NOT LOGIN IN!!!!!!!) On: March 04, 2005 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!! I OUGHT TO SMACK THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA HIM!!! *friends hold me back* IF HE WERE REAL I WOULD SHOVE MY FOOT SO FAR UP HIS ASS--!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *calms down and looks around* whoops and people thought I didnt curse....*blushes* UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in On: February 28, 2005 21:55 CST
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holy shit!!!! im so tripping out!!! WTF IS GOING ONNN???? im soooo confused... that whole thing was a premonition in her dream right? and the whole mini assassins thing was a joke, right? STOP TRIPPING ME OUT!!!! my tiny sick brain cant handle it... but kudos on the plot twist! thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (still NOT login) On: February 28, 2005 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! But it keeps skipping words.....is that you or is mm.org screwed up again????
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: February 15, 2005 20:37 CST
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awresome chapter, but i still cant stand the thought of mini shippo assassins. HWY? anyway, awesome chapter, awesoem plot, and i hope you update soon!!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (not login) On: February 13, 2005 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!! KIRARA IS NO LONGER A KITTEN!!!!! I was never expecting that! Keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:45 CST
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UPDATE THIS STORY!! MUST. READ. MORE. I WONT REVEIW ANYMORE IF YOU DONT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Though i will read anyway...........T_T
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:30 CST
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THERE ARE MORE LITTLE MINI ASSASSINS LIKE SHIPPO??? ACK!!! well, awesome chapter, a couple of pelling and grammar mistakes, but, meh! i dont really care, juts pointing them out... ok, i hope you update soon! it's an awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:26 CST
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH!!!! assassins!!! that would be a fun and exciting job. if not a little mentally traumatising.... but, having their parent try to kill them would already have damaged their minds....
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Title: more
Reviewed By: miyoko0 On: January 30, 2005 04:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more i need 2 read the rest so hurry up will ya k tkz bye
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Title: good job I like it
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story you did a really good job on it. Ithink you write really good storys. pleaase updata soon.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic, alot of annoying spelling mistakes though. i am particular about spelling though, so dont mind me. i really hope you update soon, really original plot. like, i cant even believe it! i cant believe how vivid and creative your imagination must be, to think of an amazing plot like this!!! i am completely dumbfounded at the creativity. it's kind of improbable that kagome and inuyasha would become so close over such a short period of time, but the plot idea more than makes up for that. Kagome is a little OOC, but once again, the plot idea more than makes up for it, and the spelling mistakes. awesome!!! for the record, you have yourself a new fan!!^________^
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Title: EXALLENT!
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_kagura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sry if there r spelling mistakes in the title T.T but ANYWAY!!!! geat story plz plz plz continue!!!!! must find out what happens next!!!!! =(^.^)=
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