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Title: OMG! Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 15:48 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is such an AWESOME fan fic!!!! Please update ASAP. I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Title: WOW Reviewed By: kaira2828 On: July 19, 2005 10:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was so cool I want to know what comes next plezzzzz keep writing .
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Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 10:12 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL! Inu is sooo childish and u so must write more!!! Write more soon! YAY! Funny chap!
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *am i ever signed in?* On: July 04, 2005 15:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY.... but your grammer and spelling really suck (No offence), and you use certain phrases too much like... also... and seeing as... yeah... you need to work on that a little. Other than that i really love it!! UPDATE SOOOONNNNN!!!!
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whi... On: July 04, 2005 14:03 CDT Comment/Review: OOOOOOOOOO kinky
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whi... On: June 05, 2005 13:41 CDT Comment/Review: ...bad....grammar! EEK! ok, awesome chapoter, im not exactly sure where this plot is going, but whatever. p[lease try and fix up your grammar and spelling! (defiant and definitely are two very different things) ok, i hope you update soon!
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Title: KeWLiO! Also... Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 11:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: 'School for the bad' Huh?! pretty cool. I must say that Inuyasha is a bit off and so is Kagome, but hey that won't stop me from enjoying every minute of it! So yea really cool and PLZ! Hurry up with tha review?! Also one more thing, have you thought about going back and putting in the little war stoy between Inuyasha and Kagome. It'll be more fun to read all the things you think of, on what really happened that day Inu and Kag meet. Right then Todles! Always confused, so there!, Shelby (aka Full_Blue_Moon) Ps. Also 4 the reason i gave you a 9 in spelling was i saw a cuple (like 4 maybe) words, like when you wanted to say know u put now! but thats all. Pss.I gave you a 9 on Enjoyment because its going a bit to fast, and i cant fully understant what there doing. And i don't really enjoy being in the dark and having to think really hard to figure what it is your talking about but over all REALLY GOOD Pss. Okay this is my last ps so there and c;ya next chapter (hopefully soon) Psss. OKAY! now this is my last! i just wanted to say srry for the really long review i hope you don't mind!?!?! So gtg c'ya
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Title: i totally didnt login Reviewed By: tanwen-whi... On: May 08, 2005 21:13 CDT Comment/Review: ok, fabulous chpater, but, i dont think sesshomaru would actually care what his 'half breed half brother' does. as long as inuyasha leaves him the hell alone, he wouldnt care. because inuyasha doesnt have anything that sesshomaru wants! see wmy point? besides, SESSHOMARU IS TOO HOT TO BE EVIL! ok, i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: feh On: May 04, 2005 17:59 CDT Comment/Review: update soon
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (not login) On: May 04, 2005 05:17 CDT Comment/Review: holy.....$***! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: April 30, 2005 16:01 CDT Comment/Review: let me guess... there's a trap. sesshomaru's waiting for them inside, and kaede is on sesshy-chan's side. please dont make him the bad guy!!!! i love him!!! oh well... fabulous chapter! i really look forwards to your next chapter, and if you dont mind some contructive critism, i think your writing could use more detail. like, what the places look like and stuff... but, i think everything needs more detail, so dont mind me. and, im so confused by the game they were playing! what the hell was going on? it went WOOSH right over my head...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire(not logged in) On: April 18, 2005 16:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: is this another dream? ive noticed some grammar mistakes, and some wrong tenses, but other than that, totally fabulous! i hope you update soon!
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Title: update Reviewed By: feh On: April 14, 2005 21:42 CDT Comment/Review: update soon please
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Title: *in shock* Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (not login) On: April 13, 2005 08:56 CDT Comment/Review: *gets a machine gun* KILL KAGGIE'S MOM!!! KILL!! KILL!! *pulls trigger* AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! *gun goes wild!* OH SHOOT!!!..... -_-.... Update soon!Does anyone have a bandage? *passes out from injury*
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: April 11, 2005 15:39 CDT Comment/Review: AAAAAAAHHH!!!! MORE MINI ASSASSINS!!! eep. oh! will they be sent to kill the school kids, but will actually save them? ooo. ^_^
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