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Title: really damn good!
Reviewed By: Brass On: March 18, 2005 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome I was waiting for somebody to make a magically older negi fic. I was so frustrated I was gonna do it my self. But now that you did it I'm happy. It was really well done too. Koodos! x0x0 Brass
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Title: Making corrections in my review!
Reviewed By: J.C (again) On: March 16, 2005 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, actually, I could only find one mispell when I thought of it, and looked again. Sorry about that, also, maybe I was wrong about Negi and Shizuna, who knows? ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: J.C On: March 16, 2005 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You finally updated! ^_^ This chapter was really great. I liked all the girls reactions to Negi now, and now with him being a young adult, his hormones REALLY will play a part. Please don't make Negi into a pervert! I know you won't, but still! Also, you were hinting throughout the chapter something might happen between Negi and Shizuna, am I right? Well, also a couple of mispells, here and there, but it didn't bother me. Great chapter, update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jin bo On: March 14, 2005 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Very entertaining. I hope you will update soon. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Marei On: March 11, 2005 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats the hold up? I've been waiting for a good negima fic for a while and it seems that I've found one, but as usual the good fics always take forever to update. It's so grueling....the wait....
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Leeks On: January 27, 2005 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Excellent work! I can't wait for the next chapter so please update it soon
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Reviewed By: fanfic reviewer On: January 23, 2005 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
i think it was a pretty good plot (considering the fourth book is a ready out). it's pretty interesting, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Raze On: January 18, 2005 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very well thought fiction. Please continue, it is quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: J.C (Again) On: January 10, 2005 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey there! Umm... I don't want you to rush for what I am about to say, that's how some stories break apart because writers try to rush for readers... but I really hope you update soon! I really like your story and I have even read some of your other stories at ff.net, and you haven't updated any of them... I just hope your not dead, because your a great writer and I really enjoy your work!
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Reviewed By: Black Tear On: January 09, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. i love this. there are only two Negima fics out there and this is the better... seeing as the other is Hentai... please for the love of all things continue with your writing of this fic and supply those of us who know of Negima and love it with more of your ever so good story. i rated your grammar and spelling at 9 because there will almost ALWAYS be errors unless you're an English major. that and there were a few more commas than necessary plus a minor few spelling errors. nothing to take away from the fic so it's all good. thus the 9. everything else was nigh-on perfect. keep up the good work. Good Luck.
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Reviewed By: Umino Jin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another Nefima fanfic never thought I'd see the day. I really can say that I enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, its nice to see a negima fic that isn't hentai. it has great potentail and you may just have to draw a pic of what negi looks like, the manga just doesn't do him justice.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:35 CST
Comment/Review:
This has potential, I shall look out for more of this one.
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Reviewed By: Poivert On: December 10, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow there isnt alot of Negima fan fics out there and the ones that are out there except for one suck but so far you're doing a good job and please hurry up and update!!!!
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Reviewed By: J.C On: December 10, 2004 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
This a great story, and I hope you choose to continue writing it!
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