| "A Simple Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: KiraTheWolf On: January 30, 2010 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I want more Negi/Konoka in the story though... there are too many Negi/Nodoka and KonoSetsu, in my opinion. Please say you will keep writing this *.*
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Reviewed By: Random Joe On: July 12, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very good at writing. I got hooked in the first chapter. I may be saying this a little late, but great job!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
heh i just read this again, and i think your co-author is talented.... and how do you know when to split your paragraphs? my fic, so far, seems to be huge blucks of type./...... TT_TTanyway, still loving the comidy and plotline, keep it up!!!! that was directed to both you and your co-author
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Reviewed By: Non_Euclidean_Geometeric_Shape On: September 16, 2006 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
How should I put this... I liked the story but as it is it's really hard to read, as in why is the entire chapter compressed into a single block paragraph of text? Neither of your other stories are like that and I really enjoyed both of them but as this one was it was kind of a chore to figure out who's talking when and such. This isn't a flame, since I did like the story, just a request that you do some formatting to make it easier to read.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, my.... I thought I reviewed this fic..... OH! I remember now, I read this before I made an account..... Pretty good plotline, and twists..... Poor Negi XD keep it up!
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Title: A Simple Wish
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please and do the rest of the chapters as u did chapter 3 and i will be happy.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Hoshino Ai On: March 15, 2006 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this, I couldn't stop! I love the concept and plotline. Much better than those overdone, boring, ridiculus Konoka/Setsuna pairing stories. Keep it up, and best of luck! I'm your fan now! ^_~v
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(NSI) On: December 01, 2005 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey!! i really like this...lol it's just like the manga and sooo cute!!! lol i really look fwd to and update with this k? toodles!!
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Title: UPDATE ALREADY
Reviewed By: VooDooDragon On: August 24, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE U GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN WAITIN A GOOD BIT AND I AM GETTIN TIRED OF WAITIN.
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Title: An enjoyable fic
Reviewed By: a stranger On: July 19, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A like your Negima fic, you and your co-writer are writing a fun fic. One questions though what happened to the girls from the bath house who were going to look for Negi and make him hang out with them?
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: VooDooDragon On: July 17, 2005 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done the manga justice is all i can say besides update already
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: VooDooDragon On: July 17, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done the manga justice is all i can say besides update already
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Reviewed By: havenoname On: July 05, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your partner is good too. And I suppose the shopping could have been left out. I do hope you guys can update sooner. I love this fic so much! I cannot get enough of it!
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Title: Your do not suck!
Reviewed By: J.C On: June 11, 2005 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories rock, although it is a sign of a great writer when he continues to see the faults in his work. Great update, I like how Negi is so unused to his new age and form. I never knew raging hormones could be that strong! Lol. Well great update, can't wait to read more!
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Title: COOL!!!!
Reviewed By: havenoname On: May 02, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I just love your fic! This is wonderful! PLEASE! JUST PLEASE UP DATE YOUR STORY!!!!
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