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| "Wisdom of the Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Looking for Input for the next chapters
Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, I was just thinking to the next chapter of the Wisdom story. It seems from the polls on my homepage that... 1) People like Yugi to increase his harem with Tea and Ishizu, with a minor interest in Serenity. 2) People would like more story to go with the fic. So with the last part, I'm curious about what kind of conflict that Yugi should be going through. Something like in the anime or perhaps a sexual version of that. What might be the best way to like this the Wisdom? Perhaps an anti-Pharaoh cult, or a dark force looking for the secrets of the book? And what about the other characters? I'm having a few mixed ideas and am looking for input. Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Leela D On: March 22, 2005 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job, love this idea, I am so glad that this is Yugi centered and not Yami centered ( I hate yami for some reason, and I hate the fact that Tea is shallow, for her feelings for him.) Yugi does not get enough play in my book, so I think that you should make yugi dis Tea because he has Mai now and I would also like to see how Joey would feel about this, maybe he would like to get some of the action (with mai that is, do not make this a yoai ..please)
| Title: New Story Idea
Reviewed By: Leigh-Anne Hochhalter On: March 07, 2005 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a pretty good fic!! ;) Though I didn't expect Yugi to be so....interested in Mai ?.? It stuns and confuses me....So anyway I was wondering could u write a lemon fic between my OC and Yami plz?
| Title: Commenting comments
Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 14:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I based this one a thread at Bast's Anime Addventure. I am of two minds of either making it a harem tale or a Mai/Yugi-centric tale. I might have this fic be a harem and the thread be the M/Y. I also have another thread with a Yugi/Mai/Tea match. The girls are more interested in Yugi than each other, but are willing to do anything for him. All due to Lust Dust. If you would like to see it, I could arrange something. Thanks for the comment and I hope that might work might help increase the Hetro genre of this anime. HVulpes/C.King
| Title: so far so good
Reviewed By: damien black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a hetero yugioh fanfic. (Truth be told, this is the first yugioh fanfic i've read that isn't a yaoi or a yuri) Other than that I have one word for this fanfic: genius.
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