| "Wisdom of the Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 21:18 CDT
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^_^ I praise the lemony work that you do, buddy-boy! This fanfic kicks ass, all the way!! I want to see more!! Keep them coming in, especially Mai, Vivian, Tea, and Ishizu too! More women for Yugi to play with! Hope that when he gets home, maybe a little dominatrix play! Yugi being the dominate one (plus a woman of his choice) while he "prepares" his women for bed. I would love to see any of the women dressed up in sexy, leaving-little-to-the-imagnation, latex wears. Keep it up!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: DJ On: April 13, 2006 16:54 CDT
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THIS IS GETTING GOOD!!! PLEASE, CONTINUE THIS STORY FOR I LOVE IT ALL THE WAY!!! KEEP IT UP!!
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Reviewed By: lemon fan On: March 25, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story ive been readin this story from the begining it is really great keep these chapts. coming and i cant wait til the next update happens i'll keep my eye out for it
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 19:53 CST
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Ah, another excellent chapter written. I'm loving this story more and more! I want to see more breast-play action and maybe a little spanking. Please, continue this awesome fanfic! Keep it up!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 19:29 CST
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This chapter was kick ass, a true Valentine's Day present in my eyes. I want to see more soon, especially if it involves Yugi and big breasts. Keep it up!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ This was all good. I hope to see more action between Yugi and Ishizu, most especially breast action! What can I say? I like to see big-breasted women play. ^_^ Keep it up!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 12:24 CST
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^_^ This was all good! I would like to see more soon. Thanks for the update, my friend! Keep it up!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I like on where this is going. The more, the merrier! I hope Yugi gains a harem of busty, lusty sexy women. Mai turned the tables, but only a little. Yugi still has the advantage here, as far as I can see. Please, update soon! I want to see more! I would also like to see a little catfight or so between Yugi's girls and another who maybe a potential harem girl... Vivian Wong!! Plus, if its not too much trouble, I like to see a little spanking or so. You know, seeing Yugi or Mai spank Tea. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: AC On: August 03, 2005 15:38 CDT
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ah, an update, cool. Hot dancing there, and hm, Mai is gonna try and be Yami's queen, huh? Is she gonna become the villain?
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Reviewed By: AC On: June 23, 2005 11:05 CDT
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cool. it's nice to see a hetro Yugioh lemon story out there. I'd like to see Tea get some. she's my fav anime girl. long legs and nice rack, not to mention a pretty face. As for a conflict, maybe Kaiba can find the book and use it for his won purposes?
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Title: Looking for Input for the next chapters
Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 20:22 CDT
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Hi, I was just thinking to the next chapter of the Wisdom story. It seems from the polls on my homepage that... 1) People like Yugi to increase his harem with Tea and Ishizu, with a minor interest in Serenity. 2) People would like more story to go with the fic. So with the last part, I'm curious about what kind of conflict that Yugi should be going through. Something like in the anime or perhaps a sexual version of that. What might be the best way to like this the Wisdom? Perhaps an anti-Pharaoh cult, or a dark force looking for the secrets of the book? And what about the other characters? I'm having a few mixed ideas and am looking for input. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Leela D On: March 22, 2005 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job, love this idea, I am so glad that this is Yugi centered and not Yami centered ( I hate yami for some reason, and I hate the fact that Tea is shallow, for her feelings for him.) Yugi does not get enough play in my book, so I think that you should make yugi dis Tea because he has Mai now and I would also like to see how Joey would feel about this, maybe he would like to get some of the action (with mai that is, do not make this a yoai ..please)
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Title: New Story Idea
Reviewed By: Leigh-Anne Hochhalter On: March 07, 2005 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a pretty good fic!! ;) Though I didn't expect Yugi to be so....interested in Mai ?.? It stuns and confuses me....So anyway I was wondering could u write a lemon fic between my OC and Yami plz?
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Title: Commenting comments
Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 14:40 CST
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I based this one a thread at Bast's Anime Addventure. I am of two minds of either making it a harem tale or a Mai/Yugi-centric tale. I might have this fic be a harem and the thread be the M/Y. I also have another thread with a Yugi/Mai/Tea match. The girls are more interested in Yugi than each other, but are willing to do anything for him. All due to Lust Dust. If you would like to see it, I could arrange something. Thanks for the comment and I hope that might work might help increase the Hetro genre of this anime. HVulpes/C.King
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Title: so far so good
Reviewed By: damien black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a hetero yugioh fanfic. (Truth be told, this is the first yugioh fanfic i've read that isn't a yaoi or a yuri) Other than that I have one word for this fanfic: genius.
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