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| "Ties that Bind" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Lemon
Reviewed By: Kaylie On: May 12, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fanfic.I love Starfire and Robin lemons.I love placing myself in Star's shoes when I read these fanfics.I wanna do it with Robin,but unfortunatley,he is just a cartoon.Oh and LEMON Part 1 wasn't shown.But,oh well,I just skipped to the LEMON chapter.
| Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: TheUbu On: May 03, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story! The emotion, atmosphere, and creativity of this story just made me want to continue reading. I don't mean to insult but the only problem I had with the story was some of the grammar; there were some run-on sentences and some incorrectly spelled words. This removed from the story a little bit but it was nonetheless enjoyable. I was also looking forward to Starfire killing Terra in an extremely violent way but was slightly disappointed at the lack of reaction by the Titans as a whole. Having said that I suggest that everyone read this story! You've done an excellent job and should continue writing!!!
| Reviewed By: Jurodan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story, it had an interesting plot, the characters were written out as portrayed in the show with the exception of Starfire. The action is decent, if a bit under described [except for the last 2 chapters]. If I have any gripes with the story, it would be with the use of Terra and of Starfire. I understand it's not supposed to be true to the show, so Terra's character is slightly more understandable, but Starfire? She's perhaps the most physically powerful character of the team, and in this, she's unable to pull her arm away from a trucker. Other than Starfire's inability to do... well... anything besides cook, clean, and make out with Robin [save Lemons 1 and 2], the story was fairly interesting and enjoyable.
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