| "Sins Of The Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: February 15, 2005 11:42 CST
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i totally agree with seth. the pharaoh must be stop... i jsut hope it's soon. sorry but htat's all i can come up with today. laterz
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:57 CST
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This is really good...I really like it! Aria is adorable!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (it won't let me log in!) On: January 22, 2005 17:56 CST
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This chapter is so sad... Aria will grow up in good hands at least, with Seth... But I feel so bad for him! His wife taken from him in such a brutal manner. *wails* It's not fair for him! It's a good thing that the Pharoh doesn't know that the baby's sex is pretty much all determined by the man's sperm... something to do with the x and y chromosomes. I don't know the details. Please update soon!
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Title: Draza
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:29 CST
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very good chappie. Aria's constant 'why's' reminded me of long days during the summer...*goes into dreamy state* i would bug my mother all day with questions of 'why'. then she would pick me up...carry me to my room...and throw me on the bed and say 'that's why!'lol. And i see the Helpless Child made an appearence...well...sorta...poor poor little chibi/pre-monster.
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Title: whee!!
Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: January 22, 2005 16:59 CST
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aria is adorable!! poor aten... yami is more than a bastard... and i feel so sorry for seth. u would think that yami would get hte clue that the gods don't want his heir on the throne. dick is probably so pathetic he couldn't impregnate the most fertile of women if his black soul depended on it. heh yeah he's hte king alright, king of the most pathetic dick in existance!!! *laughs insanely then calms* oh that was good but i bette go finish cleaning my room. laterz!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 12:42 CST
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Wow...bloody battles and such! That's cruel...Yami is really cruel...I want to see how this ends up... UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 16, 2005 10:07 CST
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Well, that was rather deep! I liked it though. I just hope nothing happens to Aten's new friend... I have a sense of dread when it comes to Ravana. You have a penchant for some char deaths when it gives angst to the major chars! and Aria and Aten having a chance meeting, it was sweet how she helped him! However, even if I remember the moment when Marik finally met his son, in here it seemed odd how he just showed up out of nowhere... but then again it could just be that I'm used to the adults having the main point of view, not the kids like it is here... although your one comment where Anubis is fighting Aten, you mentioned Marik quite out of the blue, and it looked like a name error until you read further. Had to read that part three times to completely figure out what you meant in there. But hey, it was still a great chapter... update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: January 15, 2005 19:49 CST
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wow i like it! shows much much yami was a fucking asshole and how bakura and marik really loved their family and children. wow... i can't wait for the next chapter! and yeah ravana made an appeareance! yay!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:33 CST
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Wow, some storyline you have going! I can't wait to read more, update this soon!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 14:03 CST
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I loved this chapter! I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 13:40 CST
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This story brings back all those 'flashbacks' that you had in all your previous stories... all these sad moments, now being relived so to speak... please update soon, ok? This is such a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:22 CST
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Ohhh!! Me like! Me like! This is good. More soon!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 11:46 CST
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Oy, that was something else! I feel so bad for Marik and Bakura... both of their children born under such violent situations! Marik doesn't know his son lives though?... oh, right... he saw another infant boy slaughtered, if I remember correctly, and he thought it was his... Please update soon, I'm worried for little Aria now!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 09:34 CST
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Wow, more soon! Please!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story starting out is great. keep up the story
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