| "Sins Of The Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 16, 2005 10:07 CST
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Well, that was rather deep! I liked it though. I just hope nothing happens to Aten's new friend... I have a sense of dread when it comes to Ravana. You have a penchant for some char deaths when it gives angst to the major chars! and Aria and Aten having a chance meeting, it was sweet how she helped him! However, even if I remember the moment when Marik finally met his son, in here it seemed odd how he just showed up out of nowhere... but then again it could just be that I'm used to the adults having the main point of view, not the kids like it is here... although your one comment where Anubis is fighting Aten, you mentioned Marik quite out of the blue, and it looked like a name error until you read further. Had to read that part three times to completely figure out what you meant in there. But hey, it was still a great chapter... update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: January 15, 2005 19:49 CST
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wow i like it! shows much much yami was a fucking asshole and how bakura and marik really loved their family and children. wow... i can't wait for the next chapter! and yeah ravana made an appeareance! yay!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:33 CST
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Wow, some storyline you have going! I can't wait to read more, update this soon!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 14:03 CST
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I loved this chapter! I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 13:40 CST
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This story brings back all those 'flashbacks' that you had in all your previous stories... all these sad moments, now being relived so to speak... please update soon, ok? This is such a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:22 CST
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Ohhh!! Me like! Me like! This is good. More soon!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 11:46 CST
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Oy, that was something else! I feel so bad for Marik and Bakura... both of their children born under such violent situations! Marik doesn't know his son lives though?... oh, right... he saw another infant boy slaughtered, if I remember correctly, and he thought it was his... Please update soon, I'm worried for little Aria now!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 09:34 CST
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Wow, more soon! Please!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story starting out is great. keep up the story
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: December 08, 2004 12:12 CST
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Anubis is a real bastard. I hated him already and this only makes me sure of how big a pig he is. His wife as well. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 12:08 CST
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Wonderful start to the story! I remember in your past fics the references you made... I'm so glad you're writing out the actual story now! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: December 08, 2004 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg how sad! thank god for the kindness of the high priest and his lover. so glad you could do this side story I'm already in love with it! Now if you will excuse me I have some dolls to torture i hope you update soon!!
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