| "The Dark Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: RS Sykel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 20:03 CDT
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evil...demented...poor royu...
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 09:59 CDT
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what are your thoughts on 'a little disturbing'? That was a hell of alot more then a LITTLE disturbing, in other words...great job!!! Disturbing things attract ppl's attention, so keep it ut. MMhh, I'm forgetting something...ow yeah *takes out shotgun and shootes Bakura* DIE EVIL BASTARD DIE!!! (crap he's immortal)
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Title: Disturbing...but well written
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Disturbing...but very well written. Although the thought of Pegasus without clothes and raping poor little Ryou...*shudders*...more than a little disturbing. But don't think that is any sort of flame! You have some of the best stories I've ever read. Especially 'Koibito Yami.' But even if this was a tad weird, you are probably the best author with the best stories I've read in a long while! Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:57 CST
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My that was a tad bit disturbing, but it does seem to make sense. Very well written as all of yours are.
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Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993 On: December 09, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are sick! I love it! This is the best fic I've read in a while! You're awsome! If you can't tell I love theese types or stories! Please do another chapter! Please!
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR POOR RYOU!!! he's ruined... *burns Ryou's Body* must get evil peggy grems off! Bakura: ... moron... YOU EVIL BASTARD!! *tries to kill Bakura!* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT DO RYOU!!! please add another chapter? please? *begs* Bakrua: o.O just a minute ago you... what? freaks...
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