| "Last Song" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 05:42 CDT
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I liked it yes, but just one thing. Vegeta would never, and I repeat, never ever never, say that he was a human. I'm am sure about that, maybe he ould forget the title about the No ouji thingy, but never would he say that he was a human.. hehe.. But otherwise, I liked it. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 14:42 CST
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I so enjoyed this fic, Wolfie. It was so completely in character. The way Vegeta lets go of so much, it's really touching, almost bittersweet. I love the way Goku talks to him too. Only Goku can speak to Vegeta like that. I've seen others try in other fics (usually OCs) but it only rings true when Goku does it. Only then will Vegeta listen. A truly original fic! Congratulations!
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:58 CST
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I adored this fic. I liked the conflict Vegeta felt within him and the alternating between scenes (and the alternating was done so well that it was not confusing like most fics would be if set up in this manner). It really seemed that this how Vegeta would have acted. Kudos on a great job.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:45 CST
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A wonderful little piece, true to the anime and yet takes the canon just one little notch into a wonderful speculation--that Vegeta did really change before he married Bulma. Most romance writers take novels to get there and focus on the boy-girl dynamic. It only makes sense that Vegeta would use his rival to settle some issues for himself in a very visceral way. Nice style, efficient. Refreshing little story.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren (Too lazy to log in) On: December 09, 2004 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already told you why like this story and why... Ok I'll do it again. I thought Vegeta was so in character, and the whole is so original. You made use of your words very wisely... who said you need 8000 words to get your point across? Well done
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