"Drama of Edo High: A Modern Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: love it Reviewed By: Kerica On: July 19, 2005 21:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've found that you continue to either miss words or misspell them; such as: Her loved her so, or ehe loved her so, or "you'll taking back Lila with you". Also, you changed her name. in the last chappy, it's Lisa, yet you stated that it was Lila before. I suggest that you get a Beta reader to edit your stories before you put them out for everyone to read. Other than that, I loved it! Keep writing because you're so talented. Love, Your friendly neighbourhood Kerica ;)
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Reviewed By: katty_kat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:40 CDT Comment/Review: Ya know, it's been like.... uuuhhh.... half a year since you updated this fic. :: Gives withering look:: I'm your favourite reviewer, so I have the right to write this review telling you to get off your lazy bum and write more. ^_^ Hehe, but seriously. It was been a while since you've updated this fic, and I know that fanfic usually takes a backseat in people's lives when they discover they have a life, but let's face it. Most of them are have the best stories, and yours is no exception. Please update soon for the sake of everyone! ~katty-kat
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Title: love is in the air!! Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 12:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love you !!!! you are #1 in my favorite autors and story catagories and so.... i love you very much im going to R&R every single one of your storys i love you thaaaaaaaaat much >hugs< >
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Reviewed By: aquaserenity2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 09:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The plot well it really caught my attention. Most of all the fanfic was totally awesome, any ways on the grammar and spelling you did pretty good compared to my spelling and grammar and compared to others. Please update soon the anticipation(sp) is killing me?
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Title: shoulda reviewed sooner Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 13:57 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i read this story in march and i've been checking on updates for it every week or so. i love this fic so much and truly hope that you don't decide to abandon it. when you can, please post new chaps. i think you're a very talented author and look forward to more of your work...even if you decide not to finish this fic and start a new one. please just write. *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 18:49 CDT Comment/Review: OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LVOE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LVOE LVOE LOVE LOVE UR STORY!!!!!!!!!!1 UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ^.~ Reviewed By: Kera Sheden On: May 21, 2005 23:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heheh, love the story, I've done nothing but read this since yesterday. Sango and Miroku should visit Mama, though. That woman rock! Why isn't there a ring on Sango's finger yet?! Hopefully that will be changed before this wonderful fic ends. ~ Kera Sheden
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: April 17, 2005 19:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my goodness!! you're such a great writer!! update soon ok? That was awesome!
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Title: Great Story!!!! Reviewed By: pimp'n girl On: April 14, 2005 07:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!!! i luv ur story!!! im only at chapter 26 i think but wtevr i think u write well!!!
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Title: valcors Reviewed By: valcors [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:55 CDT Comment/Review: friggin sweeeeeett please update
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 20:17 CDT Comment/Review: Yay! By friggin' God, finally!!! I love reading your chapters again, but I really want to know what happens, so please UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, AND ONE MORE WORD....UPDATE!!!! LATERZ
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: April 04, 2005 23:59 CDT Comment/Review: great story!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: gunslinger_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 23:06 CST Comment/Review: oh my goodness!! you're such a great writer!! update soon ok? That was awesome!
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Title: InuyashaMaster Reviewed By: InuyashaMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 04:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, first-time reader, first-time reviewer. I'd just like to say, wow. You are good. I would also like to take my time to say that I have finished what you have up right now in two days. It was very exciting, and also very enrapturing. It pulled me in like a fish on a line. I was anchored and it was hard to stop. I hope to see the next chapter up very soon. I was really sad when Inuyasha didn't give Kagome a chance to explain. That was a sad part. I really liked it so far. It was great. Just fantastic and wonderful and spectacular. I can't get it off my mind. I hope that the next chapter is just as good. I mean, just from this, I can tell you are very talented and the next will be awesome. Thanks for taking the time to read this review, and good luck with the next one. Catcha later. --InuyashaMaster
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton* am i ever logged on?* On: March 23, 2005 10:57 CST Comment/Review: you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAYYYY!!!!! thank you so much and update SOON!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES! PLEASE UPDATE!
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