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| "Drama of Edo High: A Modern Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: katty-kat On: March 22, 2005 20:00 CST
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OMG!!! You finally updated!!! You don't know how long it's been. ok, first I'm like, OK, I know she probably has a busy scheduale, and is probably not going to update for a while... ... a while passes... ok, she's not updating. maybe her computer broke... and it went on for like, months, and then i was like, ok already update!!!!!!!! and then when I got an email from mediaminer saying that you did, I went all PRAISE JESUS CHRIST FOR THAT MIRACEL!!!!!!!!!!!! And then I go and read the chapter. poor Kagome and Inuyasha. Why's he going to the drug store? I hope that they don't have a baby or anything...that would totally frazzle sesshy...lol, and that would be like, omg! they had a baby, and they're not even 20!!! lol, i'm probably not making too much sense, but I'm so glad you updated, and in return, I'm writing a verry, verry, verry, verry long review. Hope you like it, and if you can't read a single word, or if you can but you're wondering why i'm jumping all over the place with the topic, well, that's becuase i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo glad you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!! My brother's like, what the heck are you doing? and i'm like, i'm reviewing to my fav author, who has just updated!!!!!!! and then i get all hyper, and i go, what's going to happen in this chapter? and then i guess, and then i read the story, and then i go WOAH!!! and then i go yay!!!! and then i update. lol, fun chatting with ya. ~katty-kat :)
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 22, 2005 19:31 CST
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hey, wow...you did write. that was GREAT. lol....Sesshoumaru even had me shaking there, LOL. great chappy....poor kids, that must have been mortifing. at least INuYasha won't mess that one up again. wow...Sesshoumaru had 'the talk' with his brother, that is great. i love how InuYasha thought he coudl get away with that. the whole time, i had a hand to my face shaking my head. wow. that took gull...one that he won't use again. LOL. keep it up, the story is great!!!
| Reviewed By: InuYoukai Teen On: March 21, 2005 18:49 CST
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Hey I really like your story it's one of the best but when are you going to update? I know your probably busy or something but I want to read more
| Reviewed By: inuyoukai_teenager On: March 01, 2005 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! I love this fanfic it's so great and I can't wait to see what happens next please update update really really quick so I can see what happens to all the characters and all the mean people too kikyo must die and so should naraku
| Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: February 03, 2005 18:03 CST
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I FOUND YOUR FIC! WHEN I FOUND OUT IT WAS DELETED O FFN...JUST LIKE....10 SEC AGO LOL, I FOUND IT HERE ^_^ WELL, AT LEAST I KNOW IT'S STILL HERE :) UPDATE SOON
| Reviewed By: Solitary_soul On: January 24, 2005 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I thought I would never seee this story ever again I read your story on ff.net, why did they erase ur story on there anyway? I'm so glad your back this is one of my favorite stories!!!1
| Reviewed By: dark pheonix On: January 20, 2005 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfiction!!! It was very hard for me to read though because I lost my dad to suicide when I was a year and a half. I always had my mom there but things went bad when I was a teenager. My sister was a "cutter" so I strugled with that until she left. but then my other sister got bypolar she was not a cutter but she is still pretty bad. I got sick about 2 weeks after she did and have been fighting it for 6 years. I really like your fanfiction you are a great writer!!! if you werent I would not have reviewed. I just dont think I could read it again it is just too hard. keep writing you know what they say "no lose no gain"
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: January 20, 2005 00:06 CST
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great update and intresting plot twist. i had a feeling Naraku was skeezeman on the side...just the way you played him out earlier to be staring at Kagome at the party and stuff. woah...great bust for Fluffy and friends. i feel sad though that the new girl is leaving, she's nifty. intresting character to bring in...and very intresting position for Kag and Inu to end up in WITH A KID IN THE HOUSE. LOL. i think i might have woken my mom up on that one. all i kept saying was, there is a child there! LOL. give a hand to the teens for that one. hehe. balls of hormones. lol. i'm sure fluffy will be thrilled of them doing that on HIS couch. LOL. great update, keep em going.
| Reviewed By: Katty_Kat (not signed in) On: January 19, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Yay! By friggin' God, finally!!! I love reading your chapters again, but I really want to know what happens, so please UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, AND ONE MORE WORD....UPDATE!!!! ~Katty-kat
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: January 18, 2005 14:13 CST
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ALSO- and i write this more to the other readers more so then the author...to write a fan fiction takes a lot of balls...its hard to nail character depictions of beings that you yourself did not create. i, being a writer, have found this to be true in all senses of the idea. to write a GOOD fan fiction is even harder. THis is by far one of the better high school dramas via InuYasha and his friends i've ever read. Hands down. To have a reader come back with such childish and ignorant kantar such as "spelling for beginners" brings a new meaning to the word LOW. also, a word to Leatree, grow up. If you cannot leave constructive criticism, then keep your fingers away from the keyboard. It's called manners, learn some. hon, you've done a wonderful job with this story and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. keep banging out these chapters like nobody's business, and we shall all keep on reading them. ja ne.
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: January 18, 2005 14:05 CST
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holy hell, how does this story not have more reviews???? absolutly awsome plot. i've been following along for a while now, but thanks to media miner thinking its better then me, hasn't let me review as often as i would like. WOW!! talk about drama in highschool. first a near rape, boyfriend flys off the handle and goes all demon, mugged, hit by a TRUCK, adn then nearly killed...i so don't envy kagome now. LOL. absolutly awsome plot and story behind it. wow. i'm amazed, honest. this is such a great fic. you have a good base for the characters, each with their individual highschool like flaws and moments, and then their courage and compasion. absolutly wonderful story. i love how it was SESSHOUMARU who got into the car with Kikyo. honestly, i normally can tell whats going to happen but when that came about, holy shit, it was like christmas...a lot of months early! don't think i've been that giddy in a while. GREAT story, great plot. absolutly wonderful, keep it up!!
| Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:54 CST
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um dude.... did you know that this is my absolute favorite story ever. ever. ever. please please please update!!!!! i love it! i love it! please update asap!
| Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To: leaptree or some shit this story is actually VERY awesome... there is absolutel no grammatical errors in this story whatsoever...so go fuck ureself bitch/bastard Sorry to anyone who finds my review offending! -_- To: dragonmistress704: YOUR STORY ROCKS! DON'T LISTEN TO PPL LIKE THAT TREE PERSON! byez! p.s. you can get my review removed if you want; i don't mind; byez!
| Title: spelling for begginer(sarcastic beyond all reason)
Reviewed By: leatree [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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totosai keiko kogetsu
| Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:56 CST
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hey you have a great fic going. spelling and grammar could use a little help here and there but it's nothing to worry over, anyway great fic update soon.
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