| "Transformations Dolls" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Jibbed On: February 28, 2012 07:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Its a great story. But where is the sex scene from transfOrmers?? I wanna read it! It was an amazing stry but I'm pissed cuz u took out the lemon |
Title: kukukukukuku!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This tickled the hell outta me! You're so friggin funny, DL!
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: KimenoLytra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha that was a fun read. I really liked Transformations but I haven't finished so I haven't reviewed yet ;^^ I don't want to die yet from one of your weapons so bubi *sneaks away*
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Reviewed By: lindygirl On: September 20, 2006 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... I like it!
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Reviewed By: YashLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 03:01 EST
Comment/Review:
i want them all O.O ::steals:: ummm fine ::pays you: there now there mine ^^
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Reviewed By: misticknight02 On: September 13, 2005 05:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very funny, I wouldn't mind having any of these. Sounds like a lot of fun to me. ^-^
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: May 08, 2005 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really funny! har-de-har-har-har!!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: February 23, 2005 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*LOLOLOLOLOL* Funny! that was very Funny! the dolls come alive, it seems like. and the batteries..haha! wow, this really cheered me up! keep it up and i loved Transformations!
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Title: Dolls
Reviewed By: Paws_on_scroll On: February 09, 2005 23:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* I would Love to heed your warnings on some of your dolls but like you and your weapons...who could really resist?! Love the ideas presented. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: celtic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I think you're a great author. (especially transformations!) Second, I thought that this story (well, it's not a story, but for lack of better words) was hilarious and very true. I liked how the dolls can seem almost "alive" and can interact with each other.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:54 EST
Comment/Review:
Great god that was so funny, i can't laugh at library, you torture me but i love it more would be great. man you are the... oh man it's soooooooooo funny. hehehehehahaha haahhaah hahahaha hahahaha hahahahaha hahahah ahahahahah ahhahahah hahahahahhahaha ahahahahhahahahah ahahahahahahah ahahahahahahha ahahahahahahahah ahhahaahahhahahaha...*Zirra faints from not breathing* Zirra
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 09, 2004 20:06 EST
Comment/Review:
Uh... Um... *passes out with swirly eyes while dropping piece of paper, camera zooms in onto writing* Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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