| "The Education Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Rinibeans [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2015 08:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gutterball, you are one of my all time favorite Fanfic writers.
Like a desperate soul scouring the depths of the Internet for a
crumb or two of decent story, I've followed your work for years,
devouring your words like a madwoman. Every story fills me with
glee (and sorrow and angst) and this arc was no different. I love
returning to it over the years since you posted it. General Blue
and Goku...whodathunkit?? Can't even wrap my head around it. You
wrangled that oddball pair like a champ and crafted an
unforgettable mini series. I revisited the arc today, but found
chapter 2 missing. Was it taken down for the questionable subject
matter or was the removal just a fluke? I'd love to know so I can
reread the entire arc. Sorry for rambling. I hope you still receive
notifications of reviews on old fic eons old! Thank you for years
of late night tears, laughter, and gleeful squees :)
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Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favourate scene. When Goku was floating in the candy world and Vegeta came for the rescue. He made his famous anoucement of "only me can beat kakaroto!" then got beaten up for him. This was so sweet!! Enough for the nonsense. But I can feel you are playing the scene right in front of me. I remember the one Vegeta lie face down on the ground and Kaka was staring at his ass. Haha. I like that Goku being sensitive to protect Vegeta's feeling. He is such a gentleman. I am surprise Goku did not pry during the fusion while Vegeta apparently explored. Aah, stupid promise. I knew it! And finally Kakarotto is on top!! Haven't seen that for like hundreds years. Hopping around! God their love making was just beautiful!!! I read several times.I am short of words, I can't describe it. But it is brilliant. I love the ending. Kaka will have his wish granted. I love happily ever after ending. Prince and his mate. haha. Thanks for a great story.
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Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 15:07 PDT
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I was too quick to post comments in the second chapter. The way raditz treat his little brother make my heart ache. It is so great to see saiyan brother look after each other. Also the promise Goku made. I can't help feel a bit worried for him as Vegeta need some persuation sometime and I am sure he would not mind a bit rough. Aah kaka you just give yourself a housebound. Oh BTW I am topbear. Love your story, although this one is a bit angst.
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Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 14:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Raditz was hurt! I can't believe goku was check blue and his brother's love life during a battle. I love the fighting scene. But I am not sure about the 13 x goku pairing. I am glad Goku finally turn the table around and remind me the glory in the anime. Now jump to read the final exam.
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: xixixi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this today I am so happy! I normally don't read other pairing apart from Kakax vege but this one got me interested straight awway. I totally can see general blue doing what you have described! He must be surprised what Goku had turn out so fine. I LOVE the tv series, they are my childhood favourate. I love that you give it a adult twist. Thinking of little goku always put a smile on my face. He was so cute and fiece and wild as a child! I love the comments between blue and white, it is so funny to see them fight. I wonder whether white recognise goku. If he did he would be so surprised. And Goku's trying to learn to impress Vegeta!! priceless. The Lemon is great, as you always does. I am speechless. The way you writing lemon is just sensual. I so like it. I am glad Goku kid has provide some redemption for general blue. Aww, I can see Blue grew attachment to Goku. I think he and raditz would be a great match. I guess Raditz would be on top. hehe. Goku's meeting with his brother is priceless too. I love to see they are nice to each other. Poor Raditz, the last few paragraphes are very funny. I crackled like mad. My husband though I was being nuts again. Some completely off topic comment: did you remember when Bulma saw Blue and blue told her he love guy? She said, well actually I am a man too. That was hilarious to me.
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 18:06 PDT
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Gentle Instruction - I laughed all the way through. You really captured Goku's innocent way of phrasing things. Not many stories have Blue in so it was a pleasant surprise. Loved his step by step instructions to Goku and Goku's sometimes puzzled reactions. Learning Experience - That was dark and thrilling. Poor Goku having to go through that. Why didn't Yemma give him his powers back earlier, that was nasty of him or was it a mistake. Maybe he didn't notice in time :( It did however give Goku a different perspective in regard to wooing Vegeta. Final Exam - That was so hot, and so moving. Goku not able to touch Vegeta, wanting to sooo much, Vegeta not letting him until he was ready. Finally fully together. Then the tear-jerking end when Vegeta disappeared, so sad *sobs*. Hope Goku's wishes do come true and he, Vegeta, Raditz, and even Blue, meet again one day in the afterlife. A wonderful trilogy, thank you.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is so cool. I saw the pic your talking about and it\'s interesting to see someone actually create this pairing. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so much fun!! I especially love Goku's enthusiatic greeting of Radditz--sheer loveable innocence. And Radditz's reaction is priceless. Your dialogue is to die for, so natural, not one hitch. It's really a perfect little one-shot. Very hot, too *never thought I'd say that about this pair*.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! It was so original. Great job. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Messala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 20:58 PST
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this is great! it's cute and over fantastic! this is the most creative fic I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 00:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great one-shot, wherever did you get the idea for it? ;D I'm so glad you wrote it. People who write odd couples are super cool, and those who generously write fics for other people are the coolest of all!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 15:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!! You sly thing! What a marvelously entertaining piece. Full of gems and lovely lines. Goku utterly charming and Blue in perfect character (that Red-Blue exchange was to die for!--heh) Are you sure you're not Jewish, Gutterball? Quite the little matchmaker you are! Hope my boy Raditz and Blue are very happy together...you know I have an action figure General Blue and he's always desperate to find someone--maybe I'll introduce him to Raddy. They're both built for one another. "I envy your Vegeta." What a sweet line. A great one-shot. Did my heaven piece give you an idea for a hell piece? (nah, I know Dragoness was there before either of us--! I'm just so happy to see Raddy again! His cameo was priceless!) I take my hat off and bow to your lovely talent! d-chan
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Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 11:37 PST
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That was a fun romp. I liked the completely unusal pairing, and your Goku was priceless. That affable innocence is hard to write. I really hope Blue and Raditz are happy together.
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