| "Highschool life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: i needs more chapters
Reviewed By: inuyashafanfictionlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not insulting it im jsut saying that i needs more chapters cuz i lie this story its interesting i like stoires like that and this is a good one but needs more pages
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Title: needs some work
Reviewed By: kidkool8020 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
look, im not saying its bad but u need to work on it some more. if u have spell check, then i suggest u use it. but anyways, great story.
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Reviewed By: black_rose28(not logged on) On: April 16, 2005 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was...kind of confusing but if you just made the spelling and the way you made the text it would be alot less confusing! But like shessyz_koiishi said, its a good plot ^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshyz koiishi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a good beginning, but u keep switching when they talk, which really confuses me. Plus, the grammar is kinda messed, but the plots really good, u just need 2 wrk how 2 arrange it...
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice well written story I love it Pleasssse write more. Since I'm your first reviewer. Please continue, it's just a small request. Please and thank you
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