| "All of The People..." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: mlo90 On: December 28, 2015 02:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, I laughed so hard! and the granny part almost killed me xD
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Title: Sorry bout that!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 08:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I copied one of my reviews.But I absolutely love this,now those two are locked up with the so called 'wenches'!!!!!Hurry a right more!!!!!^___~
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Title: MAAAANNNNNN
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 08:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY PLEASE,YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE OF THIS NNOOOOWWW.THIS IS THE FIRST STORY IN A LONG TIME THAT I FIND INTERESTING.PLEASE DON'T LET ME GET UNINTERESTED OKAY!!!
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Title: ha
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: June 21, 2005 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. um that sucks
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Reviewed By: Oozaru Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 07:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good! Very funny! Update soon and crank up the b/v romance!!!
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Reviewed By: Ecco [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 11:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I highly enjoy this fanfiction, and I look forward to the finished piece. I have one suggestion. I get a little confused when you add your own thoughts into the story, (with parethesis and your own cute comments like this) when you are deep into the plot line. I would stay away from that a little bit more. But great job! Keep it up!
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Title: MAAAANNNNNN
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 17:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
HURRY PLEASE,YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE OF THIS NNOOOOWWW.THIS IS THE FIRST STORY IN A LONG TIME THAT I FIND INTERESTING.PLEASE DON'T LET ME GET UNINTERESTED OKAY!!!
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Reviewed By: heiress2thethrone (notsignedon) On: June 03, 2005 06:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
what a good fic. please finish, id like to see where ur going with this. keep it up. i definately love ur little sidebars about how u cant stand yamcha since i cant stand him either. hopefully he'll get his in the end. nice work
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