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| "Digimon Saga: A New Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: RodTheBladeStar (nsi) On: March 03, 2006 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. By the way, thanks for all the support on Unity! You have talent, I'll give you that.
| Title: Awesome as ever
Reviewed By: your buddy, metaletemon27 On: February 21, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad you got kicked off for being interactive, but the story is still awesome. You filled it with a lot of action, and the new Digimon Emperor will definitely be regarded as one sick piece of &^%$. Keep it up, dude. We all need more action around here.
| Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
That was pretty interesting. All the love talk was making me turn into a giggling school girl again. ^_^ Anyway you had some grammar and spelling errors, I'm thinking you might want to let someone proofread your chapters. And when you were introducing the new characters, it was coming up too much like a stat card then the introduction of a character. For the next set of characters you introduce you might want to come up with a better way to describe these characters. One that fits the flow of the narration of the story. But so far so good. You are really coming along nicely. Keep up the good work.
| Title: Digimon Saga: A New Beginning: Welcome to Primary Village ( Chapter 3 )
Reviewed By: MadWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I see your finding way's to get me to review?, please get that off the bottom of chapter 3 I don't like my name used like that, and for me to insult monkey's could start something else where wich I deffantly wish not to start.| It look diffrent from your usual writting, and the plot and mix was very intresting.| other then a recheck needed, and a few misspelled word's your doing better then I am. Im only getting check's, and no reviwe's
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