| "Shattered Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: continue
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
so... this is good... how will the others react when they find out what's happening to Toboe?
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Reviewed By: Na(draechaeli) On: June 06, 2005 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great beginning to a ficcy I do so hope you update soon i wanna see what happens, and what Toboe will do, and how he'll fair in a fight, etc. Update soon please! ~Na
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Reviewed By: Foxy Grampa On: May 03, 2005 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't even know if you're still doing this story, but I just thought I had to say.. I hope you're not under the impression they actually phisically transform into wolves n_n; 'Cause, they don't =o It's all like, a disguise thing. When people see them they see humans. You know that because their footsteps are marked like paw prints, ect. THey've said it befoer to, but in a kind of bilical way so it's understandable that people get confused xP I'm not sure if they see eachother as humans or not, but I like to think that they can just for the sake of the fanfics people make xD So... just had to clear that up, don't be offended if you already knew this >_>; It's just when Toboe said "We have to go as humans" was kinda obvious to me that... you didn't xP
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Title: oO
Reviewed By: darkflame7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
well....never seen Toboe like that! great start in the story so far hope the next chapter gets up soon!
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