| "From a Lover to Hiei" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: anh On: April 28, 2007 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's awesome.i love it
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Title: *tears*
Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's sad but i guess some people in this world will never learn how to love and i know a few people like that but what can i say we're just ordinary people but i know which way to go XD it was really good!
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Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wait, I have a question. If your name's Kuramas gurl, why do you love Hiei??? o.o It doesn't matter... I still love your poem!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude... That was deep! I loved it!!! It kinda reminds me of- Nevermind! ^^ It was awesome!!! You're talented!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 21:54 CDT
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Tha...that...that w-was beautiful..waaaaaaaaaaaa!I loved it, the emotion!WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
AWH... I LOVE IT, IT WONDERFUL. OH... I LOVE IT ~_~
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Reviewed By: Chelle On: January 25, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, this is one of the worse poems I've seen about Hiei, even written from a fangirl point of view (which is a pretty bad start). From the looks of it, he treats you like shit and you love him all the same, for some unexplained reason. The big question, then (unless you are a masochist), is why. Other than that, you don't "deeply" engage his character; that is to say, you don't try to understand him, or dissect his psychology, or history, or personality, or anything. You spit out random phrases of how he treated you horribly, each followed by a sentence mentioning your undying love. Er...yawn. Gettin' real old, real fast.
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Title: black princess
Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
i love it it reminds me of a guy at my story
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Title: I'm psycho, I admit it.
Reviewed By: Crimson Suns [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh... hmmm...ummmmmmmm........eeeeeeeehhhhhhhhh........errrrrr.....props.. for...you? it didn't rymne...at all. But it was...uh...deep... and poetry all the same. it was awesome... but it definitely makes you think. I like that you didn't make him all lovey dovey. You showed the cold and bitter truth about Hiei. I applaud you sincerely and curse those who are too ignorant to understand it's deepness. heh heh heh. CLAP!! CLAP!!! CLAP!!!!...uh..yeah. This is usually where I say UPDATE...uh..please. But since this is a one shot, I... can't. It seems i have reached an impass. This is where I bid you farewell. Farewell and I wish you virtue in your journey to finding a rhyme. lol. JK. uh...BAI!! *waves nervously and grins shepishly as she backs away.* and whatever the police ask you... IT WASN'T ME!!!
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