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| "True Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I tryed writting a review when I fist read the story, but my computer wasn't working right. So I'm trying again. I really enjoyed this fic, but then agian I have a soft spot for crack pairings. The lemon was very good, and the psycology of thi fic was intringing. I for one would be intrested in seeing more, if not of the story then at lest more fics form you. My only complaint is that there were some missing beghing quotes and a few typos that added unnessisary dificulty to the reading of the fic. But style wise it was very good! Thank you for writing it! ^_^
| Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tryed writting a review when I fist read the story, but my computer wasn't working right. So I'm trying again. I really enjoyed this fic, but then agian I have a soft spot for crack pairings. The lemon was very good, and the psycology of thi fic was intringing. I for one would be intrested in seeing more, if not of the story then at lest more fics form you. My only complaint is that there were some missing beghing quotes and a few typos that added unnessisary dificulty to the reading of the fic. But style wise it was very good! Thank you for writing it! ^_^
| Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic vary much, but then I have a soft spot for crack pairings. The lemon was well written, definatly above par in quality. The only problem in the story is that a few begining quotes were left out, adding a little dificulty to reading the story. If you proff read the story again it should be fixed. But over all it was entertaning, and one of the best PWPs that I have read all year. Thank you for writing it. ^_^ jaya
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