| "young love" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: more please
Reviewed By: GGT_lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, this may be like 5 years late...but i think you should continue the next chapter. I want to find out who took Goten away, and what the reason is as to why Goten had to stay away from Trunks for his safety. I hate it when my imagination runs. please want more. Thanks and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Byakugan_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeeeey! nice fic....Keep on writing plz i wanna see if it was Gohan or vegeta that was watching them...
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Reviewed By: KJ On: March 27, 2005 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah a lemon. it was short but don't get me wrong it was still good. I'm looking forward to a next chapter. So will goten be there in the morning or not...remember that I'm still here if u need help. i'm glad to help anybody who needs it. Just send an e-mail and continue working on this awsome fic....Ja'ne until next time...
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Title: Need Lemon
Reviewed By: KazeTsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY your story is sooo good. I read this back in the begging of Feb and was mad u didnt update and when i saw it today i was like YAY! OMG U NEED TO CONTINUE YOUR STORY IT IS GOOD!
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Reviewed By: KJ On: March 23, 2005 18:41 CST
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Okay okay I'm reviewing so does this mean a lemon??!! I hope so hehehe this update was good but a lil short for me but since u have been in writer's block I'll go easy on u....^_^ Don't take it the wrong way I loved the update and can't wait for more...KawaiiJade
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Reviewed By: KAWAII JADE On: February 02, 2005 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it I love it I wat some more of it...hehehe keep up the good work Ja'ne great writer
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope this review inspires u to write another chapter. What happen to Goten? Abd waht is the other story? I'm confused but it's probubaly more my fault then urs. Don't take that the wrong way i don't mean anything bad from it. I love this fanfic and I hope u continue working. UPDATE SOON. JA'NE
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 17:08 CST
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Hey sorry the last reivew u got was from me...I was on my sis's account to do something and I forgot to sign off. please forgive my stupidity
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Reviewed By: Spirit Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 17:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again. it was short but great. I loved it...update soon
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU BETTER WORK ON THIS FIC1!! U HAVE 3 REVIEWS NOW!! Sorry for yelling but pretty please....?
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: anonymous young person On: January 11, 2005 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Please update soon! I'll make sure to read it once you submit it!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: January 09, 2005 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i saw your note and i just want to say i liked your fic.. but i didnt like the part of goten wetting the bed.. not manly.. but oh well.. keep writing please
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