Title: I love it Reviewed By: Tocholong On: February 17, 2005 10:53 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I'm expecting this fan fiction so much! Please go on!!! And I also expecting see romance scene:)
Title: very good Reviewed By: hikaru blueberry On: January 14, 2005 16:30 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Ok i think that that was a really good start. I like your style of writing and this is new to me. i read the manga but i have not seen very many on the anime. some of your spelling is off but thats ok becuase i cant spell worth beans. your grammer was fine. creativity is great too becuase i have not yet read a story where someone loses their memory. enjoyment factor is great. i want to read more! my overall rating is 10 beacuse i love the story so far. hikaru is my favorit magic knight. some of my friends call me that but now im blueberry. please please please PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!continue this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
