| "Bathroom and its problems" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Funny and Sad
Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I couldn't stop laughing than once you got to the ending, I was stunned, it made me want to cry. It's so sad, I almost hate it. But I still love it at the same time.
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Reviewed By: MeShelly On: July 31, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...at first I thought it was just, "Oh, a cute comedy piece." The mood dropped down so fast in that last scene I could only stare at my screen in shock and want to cry. Very well done; an excellent example of understated writing.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
T_T I have the insane urge to laugh and cry at the same time... heh... ^-^
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Reviewed By: kari_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story. it was very fun to read. i loved it, it was so funny in the beginning, with Hikaru calling Sai a pervert. and then so sad when he wasnt there anymore, i wasnt expecting it such it deffinatly added some points to the fun factor. even though you writhing isnt the best ever, you plot and story made up for it. i really liked it. ^_^ Kari
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: cat_demoness_Lynx(not signed in) On: April 08, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it it was fuuny!!!! but the end was sad even though it was a short sad part it made me sad :(( but i still loved you story!!!!!!!
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Title: dfdf
Reviewed By: Insomniac Jaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is chocking* I-I loved this! It started so funny then ended so s-s-SAD!! *sob*
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Reviewed By: karasu117 On: March 25, 2005 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
good fanfic!i like it.. hope to read more of your works of hikago! ^-^
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