| "Ichigo's Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to have some trouble formatting your Japanese. Other than that, no real problems. Definitely continue with this story, I would love to read it cover to cover.
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Reviewed By: Zefrn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a very good and interesting story. Please continue.
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Title: UGh,,,,,,spelling
Reviewed By: BattleAngelKurumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry...spelled BAK wrong it was annoying me...... Love 'ya AGAIN! Ja! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX -BAK
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Reviewed By: BattleAngelKurumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Blue Dragon, it's BAK from FF.net!!! Re-read your sotry!!! AWESOME AS ALWAYS! UPDATE SOOOOONNN!!!!! I Love 'ya! XOXOXOXOXOXOX -BAL
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Reviewed By: Elf from space On: February 24, 2005 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I really enjoyed seeing an Onegai Teacher fic in which it explores someone finding out Kei's secret. However the poor spelling/grammar and the Japanese words which seem to have become formated incorrectly really detracted. Check your usage of then/than and your/you're. Thank you for providing the glossary, those are crucial if you feel that you must use Japanese words.
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