| "Rescuing My Beloved InuYasha" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm in the middle of reading this & i noticed that ur chapters kinda got a little mixed up. chapters 4 & 5 should be flipped, or else the story gets confussing. just thought u should kno.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 23:36 CDT
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that kinda confused me...but all in all I liked it...It was cool how you did some things...and did you know that chapter4 and 6 are the same thing? just putting that out there so you would know if you didn't already...anyway...great job...you did good...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Story Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!! lol erg, i LOVE your story! hmm you've developed the characters VERY nicely and didn't get too OOC! im glad you didnt! well, bye for now!
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 14:40 CST
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I dont want to be a nag but it seems like you didn't put that much effort into your writing...Dont get me wrong, i loved your plot but you didn't put enough detail into your writing. The characters were all pretty much out of character as well which bugs me a lot. Dont take this the wrong way but, if you want to see some EXTREMELY good writing, you should read some of Sueric's writings. Especially Metamophisis....Agian, i dont want to be rude i just want to help you improve!
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Title: kewlness
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, this is kewl, but it's Sesshoumaru. no 'c' Ses-shou-ma-ru. there, that's been nagging at me for a while now. ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome stroy, I love it! It gave me so many ideas for the sequal to The Last Princess where...oops! I'm blabbering! But this fi is awsome, I love this fic and I think you should write the semi-sequal if you really want to!
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