| "Dreams come true......" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Dreams Come True......
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Eh...
Reviewed By: Mega Dawg [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was okay. Just spellcheck and work a little longer on it. Good for your first fanfic, especially since it's a lemon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, well that had the potential to be a VERY good lemon fic, but it was to short, needed more details and there was no plot, which would be fine if it was a little longer. mind you I have yet to write my own lemon(I'm getting to it!)but I have read a LOT! so I know a thing or two, but anyway it was still a pretty good one-shot. e-mail me when you write another one, because I would really like to read it k? and please don't think this is a flam, because it's not. I'm just trying to help you a little with it. I hope you don't mind, as long as you want to write then you keep writing, no matter what anyone says(including me)k? don't forget to e-mail me! e-mail is Christyinu@aol.com. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmmmm... Well... it was ok...I mean it could have been better I mean I did like it, but it was to short. B-
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