| "Change of Heart?" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Shousetsuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite an enjoyable piece of fiction! I really enjoyed the interaction between Doumeki and Watanuki at the shrine. Good job.
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Reviewed By: wobin On: October 01, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with everyone! Your writing captured both caractures so well and I really loved the pacing (oh, and the steamy bits were soooooooooo nice!).
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Title: Characterization!
Reviewed By: ----- On: September 16, 2005 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! Lemon with characterization! You have no idea how hard it is to find good smut that's also in character. Bonus points for you. ^_^ Oh, the smut's good too. >///
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Title: I LOVE YOU!!!!
Reviewed By: luckycharms88 On: September 11, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is soooo great, and also thank you for writing the first xxxholic lemon i've ever read. and i think your characterization of both of them was perfect. from the grumblings to the bento to the "all of a sudden SEX" it was all totally domekiXwatanuki madness. beautiful piece of fanfiction!!!!
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Reviewed By: blue leafy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 05:22 CDT
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*ahem* (blush) *ahemwhataboutlube?thatmusthavehurtahem* Nevertheless, i find it cute overall. Fluff makes it even better too. ^_^
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Reviewed By: LunarAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Wow. I loooove well-written smut. You are an incredibly talented writer, and it's not too often you find those writing NC-17 fics. Please, write another XXXholic fic. You really don't see enough of those out there. Multiple thumbs up.
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Reviewed By: muness On: July 17, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay! i've been looking for doumeki/watanuki forever! and finally we have some decent smexing! XD not that i didnt enjoy the fluff too but everything else was always so dull and short. you did an excellent job!
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Title: *fans self*
Reviewed By: merk On: July 07, 2005 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. I loved it. The only problem was a couple of plot holes, like Watanuki lives by himself. Yup. So they could go to his place if they wanted to. And no one would notice anything about the wash.
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoforgottologgin On: May 17, 2005 21:34 CDT
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AWAAAAAHHH! That's a noise of pure joy, as far as I'm concerned. So there are other people besides me who like Shizuka/Kimihiro! Nicely written, but Shizuka should show just a little more personality. He does have one, you see it in flashes. And Kimihiro is more squawky. LOL.
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Reviewed By: ChaoticSpecter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your fic. I love Watanuki/Doumeki fiction, there's not nearly enough of it. Great job. You should write another one.
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!!! I love this couple! I totally see the potential of them in the manga. Good stuff! I hope you write more of this pairing!
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Title: YES!!!
Reviewed By: Clover-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm so happy! I never thought that anybody else but me saw Domeki and Watanuki as a couple. I mean, their relationship is just so akward that it makes you think...you know. It was very well written and it wasn't too fluffy. I really enjoyed it! Great job! Kyaaaaaa! That was just too good!
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Reviewed By: Nits On: February 17, 2005 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whöä. IC. [Se oli iso kehu.] Tämä ansaitsisi enemmänkin palautetta... xP
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Cike & Tiina On: February 17, 2005 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mööhö, vähänkös me naurettiin päämme irti tätä lukiessamme. XDD Älyttömän hauska ja fluffinen ja hyvä tarina myös. Watanuki oli ihan ittensä ja niin muutkin. Doumeki oli oma murjottava itsensä ja Yuuko ny ei olis voinu olla Yuukompi. Teksti oli ihunan selkeä eikä kirjoitusvirheitä löytynyt ollenkaan ainakaan meidän mielestä. Kiitos että piristit päiväämme. :D P.S: Lintsattiin huumevalistuksesta tämän takia (ja siksi, että tiesimme sen äijän näyttävän siellä videoita, jotka saavat oksentamaan. Pelkäämme sitä pollaria kuollaksemme. Aina hyvä NC 17 huumevideot voittaa. xD) ~Cilla ja Tiina
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