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| "Shadows are Stirring" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: I know i wrote a review before...
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After finishing the story I wanted to leave another one. It ended up being even more enjoyable than I'd thought it would be, So here's a revised rating. I'm gonna go search for that sequel you mentioned...
| Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definately enjoyable and worth reading. Compared to many other fanfics, especially those of popular series, this has some depth and displays exceptional writing skills. Earned a favorite from me.
| Reviewed By: Xochen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the most part in your story the scenes are described well enough that I am able to get a very clear picture in my mind of what is going on, which is essential to a good fanfic. I have read a lot of Ranma 1/2 fan fiction and whenever I come across a gem like this on, I have a great day! The building of the relationship between Akane and Ranma was well thought out, and the intimate scenes were well placed, and not overly done. I also really loved how you let Akane come into her own in this fan fiction, she is usually treated just as a damsel in distress character, but you gave her power, and a position next to Ranma as a partner. I loved reading that. Overall, original concepts, great descriptions, and attention to detail have made a great fanfiction. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. ps. I actually got an account so I could comment, that is how much I loved your story.
| Title: shadows are stirring(?)
Reviewed By: graybear32@yahoo.com On: June 27, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than making Ranma speak with words like yer a very enjoyable fanfic. The difficulties you gave the characters was very enlighted. I would like if you would to have you send this entire (and possibly rivised as cptr 19 indicated)work to me at graybear32@yahoo.com. This is one few works I have read on this sight that showed a real tellent for writing. Please attempt to write a novel or two this world lacks authers.
| Reviewed By: The_Shadow002 On: June 19, 2005 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to say this is one the best fanficts i have ever read, easily compareable to Hearts Of Ice or Ranma, Second Time Around. This is a fabulous story and now that ive stayed up to the early morning hours to finish this story i shall sleep and then read youre sequel :) and when you release these edited onto fanfiction.net ill review them too. Eventually ill go back through the other chapters of this and review them but i just have to get to the next one ^_^ Great work and a job very well done. Fabulous chapter length minimal or no spelling or grammer errors. The characterisations were fabulous and the action was great, fantastic work.
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