| "Mobius" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: me again
Reviewed By: Shadowspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 17:12 CDT
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hello, its me again ^_^ still wondering if you will ever update again, i dont think i can go on with out knowing the answer T_T
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: Shadowspirit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, this is the best iny/runi i have ever read!!!!! what happened? are you going to up date ever again??? i must know!!! i hope you do keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: SoM (not logged in) On: May 15, 2005 13:34 CDT
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*squeeble* I don't know why I haven't read/reviewed Mobius until now. *hangs head in shame* Probably because I've only seen a scant few episodes of RK, but damn, girl, this is one kick-ass fic. Dare I say that it's better than "Roads?" I am rather fond of Adult!Shippou, after all, and Cynic!Kagome's exposed inner thoughts are muy entertaining. Love the fic. Love the characterizations. Love the plot. I'm adding this to my short list of "Fics to Recommend to Those Who Think That All Crossovers Are Teh Suxx0r."
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Reviewed By: emkhaein [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 11:56 CST
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I think I reviewed this story before, (Ellie) but here I go again: Wow, 500-year-old Kagome is a lot more cynical! (Though I suppose 15 year-old Kagome would have some pretty bitchy things to say about Kikyou in the manga if she weren't so determinedly 'nice'.) I liked your exposition... What happened after completing the Shikon jewel is *interesting*, if sad-making. Even purified and used for an unselfish wish, the damn thing still twists everything? And, hey, the whole time-loop thing is cool! I finally get why the story's called 'Mobius'. I'm curious though: are any more characters from Kenshin going to appear? Even if they never do, I really like the way you crossover(ed?) the two series: smoothly, without any big plotholes or magic-wells (I mean, except for Kagome's original one). I totally enjoyed this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ellie On: February 10, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! this is a very interesting story... but what happened to Inuyasha? And are there two Kagome-s? And why did Aoshi dump Misao? *glares* Shippou, or Shi, is pretty cool grown-up, and I like how you portray his relationship with Kagome/Kage... :) And I am 100% happy that this isn't a Kenshin/Kagome fic. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! *tries to refrain from creepy-stalker-reader-ness*
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Title: Mobius
Reviewed By: ariainblue On: February 08, 2005 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do like this story. I wish you would update more often, though the chapters, when they do appear, are well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 17:14 CST
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oh ok...so why can't she age??? and shi shippou?? this is during the Meji times so doesn't Aoshi know Kenshin or not yet??? and oh man can't wait to see the rest of this...THANKS:D
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 16:57 CST
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insteresting start...can't wait to see it cleared up a bit:D
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Reviewed By: whirleeq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 11:17 CST
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lol I can see how a grown up shippo might be mistaken for kenshin. Interesting start. is this going to be a kenshin/kagome fic? :)
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