Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
although i don't usually read much hentai, or like it, your way of describing it made the characters seem very real, like i could see the image in my head, though it wasn't totally good to have that (just kidding)! you can really put a person in a moment of time, or what i'm trying to say is that you really make the moment seem real, that the person reading can feel all the emotions too...at least that's what i got from it.the only reason i gave u an 8 on enjoyment, is i don't really approve of hentai, but that's ok! i need to broaden my horizons, so to speak... anyway, good story!!
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