Reviewed By: Daiji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fics are hard to find, specially for series heavy laden with bishonen that it seems that yaoi is the best way to go! I love the way you portray the Mabudachi's close ties without tainting it with yaoi and 'incest'. Some people just have no idea of such implications. There are some scenes, though, that is kinda hard to tell whose POV it is. Though I'm amused on your take on Aya's POV. It's like going through a girl's head, which is creepy. I hope to see the other chapters soon. I haven't read enjoyable fics lately. (sorry I can't make a more constructive critique. Work is slowly eating away my brain cells. ^_^')
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