| "An Egyptian Love Story" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: qaj On: July 22, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how the story is going. The skirt things are called loin cloth And if you're still unsure, then barrow a book about Ancient Egyptians. Can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*agrees with the person below wholeheartedly* Please, please, please continue this fic! Absolutely amazing and adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Heaven don't want me hell afraid i'll take over On: April 13, 2005 22:11 CDT
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Ahem. Is this mic on? It is good. ATTENTION AUTHOR, IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE THIS EXCELLENT STORY, I SHALL SET YOU ABLAZE AND ATTACK YOU WITH MY MASSIVE HOARDS OF MIND CONTROL CHICKEN AND FERRET DEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue, i really enjoy your story. you are one of the only authors that can write a decent Yugi and yami fic that isn't a rape scene. Thanks, and by the way, my user name is Lord_InuYasha24, not Heaven don't want me, hell afraid i'll take over. Oh, you should be honored, i normally don't write such long reveiws.
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tyler548 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it was really good I have never rated all tens BEFORE EVER!!!! you are a really good author and should totally continue but you really need to update or I am going to die please e-mail me at Tyler548@hotmail.com and I would love you forever woot anywho please e-mail me I am writing a fanfic as well it is a YamixYugi if you want to read it only two chapters so far and I really need reviews PLEASE!!!! and I totally love how you use the different Roma laguage and stuff it is really good please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: i love jill-jill &hiei On: March 18, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like Yugioh, and I have refrained from reading fanfiction on it, but I admitt that I was wrong. This story is so different and interesting that I couldn't help liking it. Your a talented writer! Hopefully your stories will help other Yugioh haters see the light *smile*
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Reviewed By: i love jill-jill &hiei On: March 18, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like Yugioh, and I have refrained from reading fanfiction on it, but I admitt that I was wrong. This story is so different and interesting that I couldn't help liking it. Your a talented writer! Hopefully your stories will help other Yugioh haters see the light *smile*
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Title: Draza
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:49 CST
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this is a great story!!! *looks at sleeping Atemu and Yugi* awww....so cute!!! I just started reading your story and i'm HOOKED!!! *grins* please write more! please? I'll give you a cookie...*holds out chocolate chip cookie*
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 09:40 CST
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I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I had already sent a review for another story via email and MM wouldn't let me send you another one. Oh well, at least this part of it is working now. Anywhoo, I didn't find this latest chapter boring at all. Hee, I loved it, especially when Jono and Yugi had their little spat. And the AtemuxYugi action was Hot (and yes, I stuck the capital in there on purpose)!! As for grammatical errors, I'm glad to see they bug you. One jumped out at me. '"You have know idea what you are doing to me, little one." ' The 'know' is supposed to be 'no.' But other than that I didn't see any (I was too busy enjoying the chappie to look for errors). So anyway, great chappie, wonderful fic, update soon! I'm anticipating the AtemuxYugi lemon, but I wouldn't mind a SetoxJono lemon in the meantime! *winks* Keep up the fantastic work! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 06:12 CST
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I wasn't bored :) I'm still hooked, if I wasn't then I wouldn't be writting it down. Okay, the chapter was a little slow, but your writting style makes up to it. :)
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Black Angel Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! You are like my new best friend!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love all your fics I've read all of them!!!!!!!! Keep going I want to know what happens and YAMI AND YUGI HAVE TO HAVE SEX AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaoi saves the world... there are times when we should thank the world for Yaoi, or else all our hot male characters could only be paired up with female leads, and sometimes the thoughts of that are horrorific! (Nothing against the female leads, honest!) It's just sometimes the males we all love deserve another one of the males more than females. LOVE THE CHAPTER! KAWAII! I can't wait to read more! I really like this and I can't wait to see where this goes!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 22:39 CST
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I was reading breatheless (remembers a line from shakespeare that would emphasize it). Awesomely written, can't wait till you update :)
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! You so have to keep going it absolutley rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 16:40 CST
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Bunnies! I have a very high hope for this fuccy now :) Please continue asap.. but's that's up to you.. :) Dark Soulmate is worth the wait, believe me
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, seriously, write more! Gypsy Yugi...so totally hot! *drools* Kawaii! I can't wait to see more! I can't wait to read more! Update!
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