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Reviewed By: ShadowRealm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I want to read more. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will always vote for a lemon! I love your writing style! And It's so good to meet another Roma! My brother in law is one too and he still travels with the caravans when he can. I keep begging him to take me with him, but he hasn't let me yet.
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Title: Hopfully
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the a/n and I hope this gets updated soon, if you plan on updating it......I hope so, it's good, I like it!
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Title: I KNOW WHAT THE SKIRT IS CALLED
Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I forgot something in that last review. The skirt thing is called a shenti. -Not- a loin cloth. A loin cloth is smaller than a shenti. I looked it up on this ancient Egypt website.
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Title: i actually logged on, holy cow pie!
Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic. It kinda reminds me of the one I have called Twisted Love. But this one's way better. =D You -must- update when possible. I know how hard it is to keep up with your fanfics. Trust me. Dx
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Reviewed By: qaj On: July 22, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how the story is going. The skirt things are called loin cloth And if you're still unsure, then barrow a book about Ancient Egyptians. Can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*agrees with the person below wholeheartedly* Please, please, please continue this fic! Absolutely amazing and adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Heaven don't want me hell afraid i'll take over On: April 13, 2005 22:11 CDT
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Ahem. Is this mic on? It is good. ATTENTION AUTHOR, IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE THIS EXCELLENT STORY, I SHALL SET YOU ABLAZE AND ATTACK YOU WITH MY MASSIVE HOARDS OF MIND CONTROL CHICKEN AND FERRET DEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue, i really enjoy your story. you are one of the only authors that can write a decent Yugi and yami fic that isn't a rape scene. Thanks, and by the way, my user name is Lord_InuYasha24, not Heaven don't want me, hell afraid i'll take over. Oh, you should be honored, i normally don't write such long reveiws.
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tyler548 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it was really good I have never rated all tens BEFORE EVER!!!! you are a really good author and should totally continue but you really need to update or I am going to die please e-mail me at Tyler548@hotmail.com and I would love you forever woot anywho please e-mail me I am writing a fanfic as well it is a YamixYugi if you want to read it only two chapters so far and I really need reviews PLEASE!!!! and I totally love how you use the different Roma laguage and stuff it is really good please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: i love jill-jill &hiei On: March 18, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like Yugioh, and I have refrained from reading fanfiction on it, but I admitt that I was wrong. This story is so different and interesting that I couldn't help liking it. Your a talented writer! Hopefully your stories will help other Yugioh haters see the light *smile*
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Reviewed By: i love jill-jill &hiei On: March 18, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like Yugioh, and I have refrained from reading fanfiction on it, but I admitt that I was wrong. This story is so different and interesting that I couldn't help liking it. Your a talented writer! Hopefully your stories will help other Yugioh haters see the light *smile*
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Title: Draza
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a great story!!! *looks at sleeping Atemu and Yugi* awww....so cute!!! I just started reading your story and i'm HOOKED!!! *grins* please write more! please? I'll give you a cookie...*holds out chocolate chip cookie*
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I had already sent a review for another story via email and MM wouldn't let me send you another one. Oh well, at least this part of it is working now. Anywhoo, I didn't find this latest chapter boring at all. Hee, I loved it, especially when Jono and Yugi had their little spat. And the AtemuxYugi action was Hot (and yes, I stuck the capital in there on purpose)!! As for grammatical errors, I'm glad to see they bug you. One jumped out at me. '"You have know idea what you are doing to me, little one." ' The 'know' is supposed to be 'no.' But other than that I didn't see any (I was too busy enjoying the chappie to look for errors). So anyway, great chappie, wonderful fic, update soon! I'm anticipating the AtemuxYugi lemon, but I wouldn't mind a SetoxJono lemon in the meantime! *winks* Keep up the fantastic work! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 06:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I wasn't bored :) I'm still hooked, if I wasn't then I wouldn't be writting it down. Okay, the chapter was a little slow, but your writting style makes up to it. :)
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Black Angel Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! You are like my new best friend!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love all your fics I've read all of them!!!!!!!! Keep going I want to know what happens and YAMI AND YUGI HAVE TO HAVE SEX AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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