| "Family Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: ElfIcarii On: June 10, 2007 01:34 CDT
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I was starved for more of your writing after chapter nine of Rehabilitation, so I hunted this one down...I know you have it up for adoption, and I would offer to take it over except I know very little about Yugioh. I've only read the first three mangas. Would you be willing to continue it as a co-authored work? If you really don't want to do the main stuff yourself, maybe I could write preliminary chapters, and you could go in and put in your touch, fix Yugioh mistakes, etc...Probably not the best idea, but hey, I thought I'd offer. I've never written anything of this type before, and it would be an interesting challenge. At any rate, I very much enjoyed what you have up there, and I thank you for writing even this much to share with us readers. If you want to discuss things, the email I use at ff.net is receiving-only (it's complicated...) so I'd respond with my other email, just a warning.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 07:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't believe I have missed this for so long.
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Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update, this story is so emotional, I love it!
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Title: Sakura-Laurel
Reviewed By: Sakura-Laurel(gods, why won't they let me use my own name?) On: December 04, 2005 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, but there were a few spelling and grammatical errors. It's relatively original, but I often have a thing for cliches. I think it could've been written a bit better, but I'm not really one to judge, as I've done a lot of the same things as well. I hope to read more of this at a later date! Forever criticizing the work of others and myself as well, Sakura-Laurel
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Reviewed By: neku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It`s very good and fun to read
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Reviewed By: RyouCreamPuffs On: November 28, 2005 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this story, cause it's really good!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really wonderful. I am sorry you killed off Yugi's grandfather and Seto's brother. I am thinking that the deatheaters were Yugi's parents. I hope Yugi gets Yami back. I love this, even though I don't usually like crossovers.
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Reviewed By: Jean Louise On: November 23, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was very interesting. It was very creative and the basic storline flowed throughout the entire thing. the only part that I thought was weird was the very last chapter. I hope you keep writing ! And I hope to see other stories written by you, your a very good writer!
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Reviewed By: yumi43093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. There aren't many good Yu-Gi-Oh!/Harry Potter crossovers that can keep my attention for more than a few sentences. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chpater, I am so glad you decided to update. This is really good. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this last year and was disappointeda that you didn't continue. I am glad to see you added more to it It's a really great story.
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