| "Fates of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: very very good
Reviewed By: rae112004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it. You really know how to write. Please keep it up. your too good to stop.
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Reviewed By: Lord-of-Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, just wanted to let you know I really liked the stroy, and no there aren't any spelling mistakes, to let you know. I don't know why you said the poem sucks, I really like it!
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Reviewed By: Radical_Edward [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I positively loved it. It would be awesome it you updated it so Good Job!
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Reviewed By: the big guy On: January 22, 2005 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that was rather interesting all though updateing is an option so please UPDATE
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Reviewed By: OzZ Cometh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. I'm usually not much of a fan of straight pairings (as sex in writing really isn't one of my things, thus a more taboo element is needed to retain my interest) but the author's style and ability is what kept me going in this peice. One thing, in the first chapter, you may want to skim over Beast Boy's dialouge--slightly out of character and also, it would be a good idea to write as intellegently in the synopsis as you did in the fic. Had it not been for my curiosity, I would have never read it--Remember, in reviews you can kinda' let your hair down with technical things, but in a fic's discription, you're trying to convince whomever may be passing by to read what you posted, thus it's a big factor in recieving feedback. Outside of that, you're doing just fine.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-stammers uncontrollably- OMFG! i did soooo not expect that as a pairing, it was good though and hey if you get any flames tell me an i'll chase the person down with a flamethrower or machine gun, heh! great story! ja ne!
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