Title: wow Reviewed By:MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 01:17 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wow! that was so sensual... so real. i could feel every emotion... every... it felt as if i was there in the room with them.. like schuldich was pushing everything he felt into my mind. i love your writing. please continue. i think you ended the story perfectly. i absolutely love it! ~mangachild420~